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Old 11-13-05, 11:00 PM   #1
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49. KOOL COL-B vs. 50. One Mic

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Old 11-14-05, 02:27 PM   #2
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check check...........................................
 
Old 11-14-05, 11:55 PM   #3
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Old 11-16-05, 02:26 PM   #4
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You got 7 victory’s, but best believe you gon’ be stumblin’ now
Trynna be cool with ya sig, but really No-one Wants you Around!

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Old 11-17-05, 06:08 PM   #5
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i dunno how u got yoself a win, cuz u neva came nice
if tha source rated hiz album, tha page would say hiz name twice

1 outta 5 mics (fo yall who neva read tha source b4) werd
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Old 11-17-05, 06:15 PM   #6
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One Mic had good wordplay and a decent personal, forgot to bold the N tho but i got what you mean, unless you did bold it and its not showing up on my comp but anyways...

Kool.. you had a decent punch and i think if you would have worded it better you would have won but gotta give this one to OM


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Old 11-17-05, 06:53 PM   #7
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thanx for the vote FI, appreciate it. uppin for more votes....
 
Old 11-17-05, 07:08 PM   #8
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You got 7 victory’s, but best believe you gon’ be stumblin’ now
Trynna be cool with ya sig, but really No-one Wants you Around!

^well..I get what you trying to do,with the NWA thingy,But the thing is..just having "NWA" bolded at the front of some words in the bar doesn't mean anything.It's not wordplay or anything.And if you spit it in real life,then nobody would see the relation.Cause you can't bold a letter in real life as a punch.
But..when you ignore that..you still saying No one want him around..which IS a punch.So..ok punch..
Nice rhyme too.

i dunno how u got yoself a win, cuz u neva came nice
if tha source rated hiz album, tha page would say hiz name twice

Well..creative and shit.But your wording was messed.I understand that they'd say his name once,to notify they reviewing his album..and they'd say one-mic again for the rating..But when writing a review..don't you think they'd say his name in between as well,at least once?Think about it..
If you worded it different..it would have been better.

Well..all in all...I'll give it to Kool-Col B for being more creative and shit..tho you both had problems..

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Old 11-17-05, 07:14 PM   #9
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You got 7 victory’s, but best believe you gon’ be stumblin’ now
Trynna be cool with ya sig, but really No-one Wants you Around!

^well..I get what you trying to do,with the NWA thingy,But the thing is..just having "NWA" bolded at the front of some words in the bar doesn't mean anything.It's not wordplay or anything.And if you spit it in real life,then nobody would see the relation.Cause you can't bold a letter in real life as a punch.
But..when you ignore that..you still saying No one want him around..which IS a punch.So..ok punch..
Nice rhyme too.

i dunno how u got yoself a win, cuz u neva came nice
if tha source rated hiz album, tha page would say hiz name twice

Well..creative and shit.But your wording was messed.I understand that they'd say his name once,to notify they reviewing his album..and they'd say one-mic again for the rating..But when writing a review..don't you think they'd say his name in between as well,at least once?Think about it..
If you worded it different..it would have been better.

Well..all in all...I'll give it to Kool-Col B for being more creative and shit..tho you both had problems..

vote-Kool-Col B

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lol, yeah i know wut u mean. thanx fo tha vote, werd
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Old 11-17-05, 11:07 PM   #10
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Both were very close...

OM's coulda been a bit harder, original concept tho/personal...

Kool had a great concept, needed to be worded better tho...

But anyways,

Ima have to go with Kool.

Very good battle, both of you tho.

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Old 11-18-05, 12:50 AM   #11
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lol

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strickly off the Nwa Play
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Old 11-18-05, 09:10 AM   #12
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v/kool...because his concept was good...could have been wordered betta
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Old 11-18-05, 09:22 AM   #13
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v/ One mic: i liked the wordplay
 
Old 11-18-05, 09:23 AM   #14
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thanx for votin man. close battle this 3-3. uppin for more votes........
 
Old 11-18-05, 03:26 PM   #15
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