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Old 02-03-05, 07:48 PM   #1
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Loving you is Wrong...(I Don't Wanna Be Right)

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check it out leave feedback......its at the top of the soundclick
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Old 02-03-05, 10:52 PM   #2
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pretty good song mate. nice chilling shit. dope beat! fuck yeah beat is sick same as the chorus. couldnt have gone wrong with it. your voice is good for this kind of track. lyrics were good, delivery yeah all that was good.
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Old 02-04-05, 01:43 AM   #3
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thanks for the feedback.....
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Old 02-04-05, 01:59 AM   #4
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Old 02-04-05, 06:53 AM   #5
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LOL @ this porno beat

hahahaa...and ur singing was nice at the beginning Ecko


LOL...


awwwwwwww u love me baby!

YEEEEEEEEEEES!


I love ur voice mayne...sexy...uh huh! yes...!

if I was a girl, I'd be moist like those chocolate chip cookies with the broken edges


ahuheuhi-98321y583


Flow was nice...delivery was good


I liked it


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Old 02-04-05, 05:06 PM   #6
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yea nice beat here.....flow was pretty good....it was on point.......delivery was pretty good also.....i liked the track....i enjoyed listening to it......good shit.....
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Old 02-04-05, 05:08 PM   #7
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beat is sick same as the chorus. couldnt have gone wrong with it. your voice is good for this kind of track. lyrics were good, delivery yeah all that was good.
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Old 02-04-05, 06:55 PM   #8
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Thanks for the feedback....lets get more
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Old 02-04-05, 10:12 PM   #9
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dope track mayne no doubt, definately put together nicely and beat fit...... nuffin bad to say too hot stay doin ya thing and i hope to found out theres some kats on here doin the real not jus doin this as a hobby........mr crooks gone watch and see cuz theres potential.... gotta be comfortable with yaself and what you do and you dun well at that this time........
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Old 02-04-05, 11:17 PM   #10
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I'm liking this one. I think your vocals could have been raised a little on the first verse. Shit was nice though.....you flowed pretty well throughout. Definately feeling the beat. Chorus was alright, but I wasn't really feeling how it skips and shit. It just sounded too fake. Not really sure what that means, but that's what I thought. Good job though man. I look forward to some more collabs with your bitchass
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Old 02-05-05, 12:41 AM   #11
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This shit really suits your vocals. You really hit the nail on the head with this one ecko, this is good shit. Damn, I love this damn beat, definatly a beat you could fuck to.. Lyrics were pretty nice too..

Props for this shit.
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Old 02-05-05, 04:03 AM   #12
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this was nice....no hate but i aint really feeling your voice....you got a gangsta type of voice and that just aint my style...but oyu doing oyur thing....keep making these nice tracks........if you was more of a liad back type of style it would have went better with the beat......you got your flow down...and your voice but you need to work on oyur lyrics...you got everythin gbut hot lyrics....dont get me wrong they is nice but if oyu wanna be the best improve your lyrics...all in all nice shit....
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Old 02-05-05, 06:02 PM   #13
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This was a pretty good track..... although flow and lyric wise, it was all downhill after the first verse..... i think the first verse was the best and pretty dope, and than after that the second verse was good, but it had some lil meesups flow wise, and u rushed a few bars and mumbled alil bit at one or two lines..... and than the third verse i thought had allotta ruched lines, and the "three to tango" part juss sounded alil off and weird to me

pretty dope track tho....... the hook was pretty good, and i like that beat for the track and ur voice over that beat sounds pretty good..... this was a decent track, but juss look over ur last two verses to see if u should rerecord em and take a few words out on some of the bars.
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Old 02-08-05, 07:58 PM   #14
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song is updated.../...
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