ok i was ok at writing rhymes n shit but then for about half a year i didnt write or record anything cuz i was too busy and now im getting back into it and im horrible..some one please help me out here.

heres a off the dome thing i did a minute ago:

I cant take this shit anymore and im about to break//
earth shattering confusion im loosen My Mind how much more of this can I take//
My lifes at stake, contemplating my own life//
A Razor blade to my wrist another tear drop with every slit for everyone who dissed//
I cant think because im loosing my self//
Faster and faster im falling into space I don’t think this is good for my health//
Ide ask you to read my mind and tell me what you think//
but you would rather turn the page//
sayin im pussy like pink//
got me confused an now I cant go to sleep//
I need a shrink//
Make my problems smaller//
Before I go insane and grab my hatred taller//


.....yea im that bad.....