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08-28-05, 03:42 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Sudden Scriptures.Presents Murder
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The Sudden Scripture Team(-UNF-,Drama Queen,Mad Knight And Sin'cere) Are Proud To Present Murder....
Key= Purple -UNF- Green Sin'cere Blue Mad Knight Red Drama Queen -UNF-: Peeps See Ya.. Consumed With Demons, Allies Become Void When The Streets Leave Ya Reap Peepers Clutching A Meat Cleaver, Capturing Nightmares Like Dream Weavers Mind Slips Back To Reality, The World Beginning To Be Real Wit Me Cease My Own Fatality My Morbid Mentality, Stops Like My Morality To Chase A Man Around The Corner And Cease Mortality As My Blade Seeps Quickly Thru His Vitality My Brain Is Consumed With Abnormality My Cleaver Slashes His Neck As He Took A Step Cuz He Aint Fuckin Wit A Murderous Personality Tho My Brain Snaps Hold The Cleaver Way Back As The Blades Pass It'll Leave His Veins Slashed With Enough Force To Knock U Off Track Like A Train Crash Poundin This Dudes Skull Tell His Brains Smashed No Remorse As His Breasts Bleed Watchin His Chest Heaves Stealin His Soul Like The Best Theives Soaked Blood Red Sleeves Laugh Insanly As I Walk Down Streets As His Breath Leaves Hook(Drama Queen): Many face we have chased to taste their blood Many tears we have seen for the crimson flood Many bodies we have dumped on side of a road Many lives we have ended by a murderous code Mad Knight: The Break of dawn and the sun rises slowly on the perspective In times of drastic measure I will kill to achieve my life’s objective Driven to kill for just the love of my child…..my only motivation This pure determination makes this killing fell more like a dedication This fucking freak…tortures my child even in the nightmare of dreams But this is soon my time to conquer my plans,live out my killing schemes Pull up out side his houses were his ford is parked, so I just sit and watch How the fuck can this perv live in a hood, where to young girls play hop scotch Tite grip of my knife,I can now see a open door to which I can now hear a sweet whistle This is the last thing he will do before is murdering of earths dismissal As I spring around the corner to see his face,one with shock and desperation Knife slitting his throat as he screams for mercy, no fear and no hesitation Blood on my face,jacket and floor but still after the killing no remorse Leaving the bloody cut up corpse behind like it was just lifes course Hook(Drama Queen): Many face we have chased to taste their blood Many tears we have seen for the crimson flood Many bodies we have dumped on side of a road Many lives we have ended by a murderous code Sin'Cere: Blastin bullets through my ear I can just see tha fixtures Silent pistols, Cannons, Ak-47’s the bullets always differ But murder in these street don’t, the cold-blooded thug way Hatin for jealousy greed is in there mind almost every single day Like lights in the corner, I picture the screams and blood in snow Times here don’t grow I kno bout these murders when it goes slow I cause them in the gangsta streets of Miami everybody knows somethin’ Especially these snitches that are bitches, they get killed for doin nothin’ Murders in different ways but someone dies the same way in the streets Even when u in ur seat at ur house nobody knows when u gon hear heats Blastin through ur windows, and glass shatterin due to the gangsta burner This is life in the hood or is it jus another life in our world......... Murder posted feed herehttp://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2400760&posted=1#post2400760
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08-28-05, 03:48 PM | #2 | |||||||
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hot shit very hot lol
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08-28-05, 03:49 PM | #3 | ||||
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damn this shit is hot....SS.....yes....we fresh to deaf....lol....really man like this collab and that hook is nasty.....
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08-28-05, 03:54 PM | #4 | ||||
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Goodness Greaciuos LOL. Anyway This OM Was Nice Yo, Vocabulary Came Strong. Some Of You Had Multi's In Here Which Is Great For The Flow. Drama Queen Your Hook Was Real Nice. UNF Good Multi's Here Sin Cere And Mad Knight Some Good Meta's Here Keep This Up For Real Though. I'd Like To Collab With Yall Soon. Good Shit Here.
P.S. Return The Favor And Check Out My Battle And Vote..All Of You LOL Holla Back.
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08-28-05, 03:58 PM | #5 | |||
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this was a nice piece.....unf had a good use of multi's in his verse, some lines were stretched though and this seemed to effect the flow, but it was a good opening verse anyway.......drama queen came real nice with the hook........mad knight....you've elevated a lot....your verse was real good....nice flow and nice vocab...keep it up...one of the best pieces of writing i've seen from you......sincere finished the collab nicely....nice structure....all in all....a very good piece.....8.5/10
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08-28-05, 04:12 PM | #6 | |||||||
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upp diggity...........
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08-28-05, 04:42 PM | #7 | |||||||
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upp diggity............
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08-28-05, 04:58 PM | #8 | ||||
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Wow. Just wow...this was a great way to put SS on the map, every one came strong, great use of multies, wordplay and vocab...good stuff
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08-28-05, 05:25 PM | #9 | |||||||
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Thanx dawg....wow puttin SS on the Map fo sho
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08-28-05, 07:24 PM | #10 | |||
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, Feels Left Out.
Fiiiiiine, I'll Make My Ooooown Club. *Posts Sign On Club House Door* "NO GIRLS ALLOWED!" Take Thaaaat Mrs. Drama Queen . |
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08-28-05, 07:27 PM | #11 | |||||||
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lmao u could be down if ya wanted dawg!!!!!!
but its up 2 everyone else to lol *wow atticus* lol |
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08-28-05, 08:50 PM | #12 | |||||||
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Bump .
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08-28-05, 09:59 PM | #13 | |||
Just searching.
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-.- Whatever happened to Fiesta after Siesta?
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08-29-05, 04:01 AM | #14 | |||||||
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just post feed -_-
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08-29-05, 04:34 AM | #15 | |||||||
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upping..................
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