yeh lately ive been seeing posts about how rv style is old.
And ive noticed the vets using a type of rb style..

this is the type of style i use...and id say a lot of "decent" textcees use..


User title says "fuck you pay me"..why?,this guys got nothin to boast
Lacks talent so bad,He avy`d jay-z in attempt to add skill to his post
Reading ya verses is more soul-destroying than hearing funeral chimes
To get ya wack spits off tha net is the only reason to "re-site" ya lines
Decree has met-a-lot-of-FORES..cos he always hits wayward punches
He`d struggle ta make the crowd "sit up",In a gym instructing crunches
17th rank?,lol..I peeped ya battles, your rhymes are nothing but flawed
Guys a "plank",..but reading his verses brings a new meaning to "board"
Decree`s all for show..so run along now & continue being rv`s ornament
Seeing "32" line up nxt,the only way ull c the nxt "round" in dis tournament


and this is the type of style a vet would use

example from L.I


You cant spit it complex, so quit the jokes before i kill con's
I'll have this kid screamin at the end of my verse more than Lil Jon
Two crews in one? Cliches and wittiness has them hoes learning
When worst came to worst its da Establishment-Councils merging
I'll split the judges in 'half', all I did was pound em
Cuz I'll collect the 'voting', while you just in The 'Council'
This ugly fuck will never score, cant get girls in that league
Shit, I'd take you on at face-value...but I wouldnt stop laughing
I may be wack at audio but this 'weak' fuck deserves to get slapped
Cuz dope 'singles' are smooth as 'paper' & he cant even 'rip' the 'track'
Nothing ya drop is hot, so quit blazin Snoops track to start shit
My old spits are a 'throwback'...with yours just add "into the garbage"

Now i see the style i use used by a lot of rv vets such as solo,marvj..etc.
wheras peeps like L.I,Pop lotty etc..go for the rb kinda style

I jus wondered wot peeps thought, the rb style seems kinda more relaxed and funnier, where in comparison the typical "rv" style seems more forced, with more emphasis on tryna cram metas,multis,etc into a line..

Thoughts?

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i just use personals in each bar, dont have a set style, jus need to elevate my structure.

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Don't really do text =/.

The first style is nice....I kinda use the first style... but i come off more cocky than that

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You always do text.

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yea alotta cats on RV force sooo much stuff like wordplay metas and punches, but the thing is that when we see these forced lines.....RV accepts them as good and RB accepts them as trash.....you know what im sayin?

hmmmm.
yeh,......
spose its down to how peeps view it...

i was kinda wondering what the best way to do it is?
but maybe its an individual thing

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Word to New Method. The structure a lot of people on RV use would be fine if everything wasnt forced to shit. Not to say everybody forces, but most do.

I stick with something that you didnt post..

Whatever though. If people would use the first structure right it would be fine, but 90% of the time here it comes out like ass.

forced shit is when you see people put in speechmarks around metas n shit to force them and both verses you've posted have displayed that gay ass style!!!!

only reason why you see it a lot on RV is cuz there is a great deal of herbz on here who are too retarded to see a real punch or metaphor unless it is forced upon them!!!

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it's not even what's being said, it's how it's being said. If you read L.I.'s verse vs. the top verse, the top verse's rhyme scheme is 1-syl (which I been saying since I first got here) which is straight up 80's. L.I is 2-syl which is a step foward for sure. Not to mention, the transitions in the first verse are nonexistant, which L.I's isn't too far beyond either. Lke the rhyme scheme is redundand and dosen't make and smooth changes, they're all abrupt. Like you jsut deliver your two bars that rhyme and go and start completely different on the next set. Like the verses are just strips of thoughts put together instead of one fluid piece. that's my 3¢ on it anyway on what I observed. And even L.I.'s verse wasn't like cutting edge woah-ness. Just more recent than the one above it.

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if you write to a beat you can't go wrong.... but in my opinion multis show experience

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that first style is gay its a newbie styled used to have mega streched bars fit on one line daz does that and he loses battles cuz his shit be madd streched just cuz its one line dont mean it aint streched as fuck that first styles gay the second style is what i use it has flow to it and better structure to it it isnt streched as fuck like the first shit

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^ You just suck though.

You don't use anything right.

..And you're concepts are ALWAYS played as fuck.

For example, in the first KORV you used a rap/wrap line.

ROFLLMFAO.

You're fucking wack.

Good thoughts...
2sylable rhymes,transitions in flow,
stretched lines..that helps me at least.

but rofl @ solo whos lines are exactly the same as the first style.lol

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