Battle Rules:

8 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 04-12-05 at 12:58 PM

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Escolayde has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-12-05 12:40 PM.

Had ta remove the 'ing' from yuh name, dude realized he aint no King
how his whole crew named Blueprint, when krs 'n J already did that Thing?
i'd was gettin all the propps in L.S, so this bitch just Bail..
closest he ever got ta sex was openin porno E-Mail
frankly you Fail..in rap, life, an everythin Related
parents should of rolled ''Solo''...
.......then this mistaken wouldnt of happend when they 'Mated'
shit i know am Hated, thats what bein Great-did..
when it comes ta you, battlin? naw...unless you gonna retire n Make-Sigs!
try n take-bids on ya verses, get nothin but Cent...
i know easters passed, but i'll make an exception..
.......an you can ''give it up'' for Lent!!

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K.SoLo has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-12-05 12:48 PM.

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checkin tha polls......................................

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Voted For: K.SoLo

V/K.SoLo......this was a real good battle...but Solo gets my vote he came wit punchs that were creative an consistent wit good vocab also good wordplay an personals structure on point i was feelin the closer...EscoLayde...u had sum good lines in ur verse i like the porno e-mail but u didnt have consistent hard hittin punchs sum lines were played also a little stretchede an not that many personals....NO HATE RETURN THE FAVOR.....
OPEner=Tie
CLoser=K
Punchs=K
Structure=Tie
vocab=K
Multis=tie(not many by either)
personals=K
Overall=K.SoLo

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Voted For: K.SoLo

KING SOLO

I LIKED YOUR SHIT SOLO, FLOWS ON POINT...NICE CREATIVE LINES WITH GUD WORDPLAY & METAS IN THERE..STRUCS ON POINT.ONLY THING ID SAY IS ADD SOME PERSONALS IN YA SPITS, THEY LACKING. OTHER THAT THAT YOU CAME PRETTY DECENT.KEEP IT UP.

ESCOLAYDE
KINDA BASIC VERSE...STRUC WAS A LIL OFF, WHICH THREW THE FLOW A LIL..U GOT SOME METAS IN THERE, BUT NOTIN REALLY HITTIN. U NEED PERSONALS TOO..FUCK METAS & WORDPLAY..MAKE YA PERSONALS FIRST THEN TRY MAKE EM CREATIVE..YA BARS LACKING COZ THE PUNCHES WEAK ALTHOUGH THE CONTENTS AIIGHT IN YA SETUP LINES...

VOTE SOLO

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re~verb vs legion (topical)
re~verb vs shard (text)

^^^ ok u want me to use personals

there was like 4 personals in there.............

1st Bar - Personal On His Name
2nd Bar - Personal On His Old Names (Buck.Shot & Shottaboi)
3rd Bar - Personal On His Crew
6th Bar - Personal On What It Says In His Location


but anyway u voted 4 me anyhow so uppin again.......................

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Voted For: K.SoLo

K.SOlo

Merk U Motionless Kid..Can’t Move, Popped Ya Tyres On Ya EscoLayde…
Brushed Aside..I Sweep Ya Away Like Fog, Watch How Ya Reps-Gone-Fade…
^^^Pretty good opener
Killed Ya In The Streets..Came And Shottaboi Wit The 12-Gauge Buck.Shot…
Solo Pimps Ya Lines..Esco Must Be A Hoe The Way He Gets Fucked Lots…
^^^HA HA very thoughtful
Coloured Like Crayons..Yellow Belly Hoe Bleeds Red Wit Bruises Black n Blue…
No Visitation In Hospital..Esco Gets Flashbacks Of Times In The Saigonz Crew…
^^^NICE LINE I LIKE IT
U Approach The Establishment To Fly High..Thinks Red Bull Will Give Him Wings…
Esco Don’t Get Dickriders..This Bitch Nuthin But A Little Prick Like Bee Stings…
^^^HAHA ANOTHA GOOD DISS
Secretly Hopin To Join The BluePrint To Get Dopeness Planned To Perfection…
It’s Rare To See Esco Come Hard..Almost As Rare As Him Getting An Erection…
^^^mmm....MEH
Admire The Irony..Got A Fake Bitch Reppin The Place Where Real Folk Do U…
End Ya Game, Got Esco – Layde Out..Its The Place Where Wack Hoez Get Slew…
^^^NICE DECENT CLOSURE
i liked most of ur verse
there were lotz of punches and da structure was good
plenty of disses and u elevated deceently
overall ur verse was nice and i liked it
8.5/10

escolyade

Had ta remove the 'ing' from yuh name, dude realized he aint no King
how his whole crew named Blueprint, when krs 'n J already did that Thing?
^^IIGHT
i'd was gettin all the propps in L.S, so this bitch just Bail..
closest he ever got ta sex was openin porno E-Mail
^^HA IIGHT LINE
frankly you Fail..in rap, life, an everythin Related
parents should of rolled ''Solo''...
.......then this mistaken wouldnt of happend when they 'Mated'
^^^mmmm..OK
shit i know am Hated, thats what bein Great-did..
when it comes ta you, battlin? naw...unless you gonna retire n Make-Sigs!
^^^ALRIGHT
try n take-bids on ya verses, get nothin but Cent...
i know easters passed, but i'll make an exception..
.......an you can ''give it up'' for Lent!!
^^^AVERAGE CLOSURE

overall ur verse was average
i wuznt really feelin ur puches
u need 2 elevate sum more
use more lyrical choice
no hate jus elevate n u b iight
7/10

my v/K.SOLO

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Voted For: Escolayde

esco had alot better punchlines den solo both verses were pretty decent but i just felt that esco took this one pretty easy he had good flow punchlines and wordplay solos verse had some good lines but some of them wern't very strong enough to win this battle vote esco return the vote on my battle please

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stop voting on my battles ^^^^^^^^^^
get that shit removed Solo...

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