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Old 01-29-06, 04:39 PM   #1
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Ike - If Religion Can Make You Kill .. ( Leave LINKS!!!, ill RTF )

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i left feed on Intermentals track about his mom.......and UNF and Trakk stars song called unfuckwitable...

LEAVE YOUR LINKS....and ill be sure to return the favor

BE SURE TO CHECK OUT THE LYRICS TOO

yep...im not much of a political or religious rapper.....but i wrote this in about 30 min the other night.........just to see how itd turn out.....better than i expected i guess...


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If Religion Can Make You Kill

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Old 01-29-06, 04:43 PM   #2
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Aigth

I Love this Beat

Word

Flows Dope,Dont Fall Off

Lyrics Are Dope,Feelin Em A lot

Deliverys DOpe As Usual
Lol

EMotions Dope

Word
I Love This



Hook's Dooope!

2nd Verse:
Flows Better I Think

Yo! Your Presence ALWAYS Stands Out On Tracks Yo

Lyrics Are Dooope!

If This Is Aight In Your Opinion Then WTF Is DOPE

Shit Lol Ima Be Suprised With U N Blakk Majiks Mixtape

Hook Again.......

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Overall:9/10

Dope Shit

Word To The Scratchin At End

Rtf:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220871
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Old 01-29-06, 05:05 PM   #3
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this beat is pretty good....... sounds familiar.... tell me y

lyrics are cool, nice delivery in presence...... u could switch it up everyonce in a while tho...... like ur delivery and ish

hook is pretty dope, simple but real good.....

good emotion and good lyrics with an aight flow = great song

somethin i may put on my ipod..... i just needa get one first
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Old 01-29-06, 05:27 PM   #4
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ayy an emotional track from u...not that commn wit u....but werd i love the beat, the flows on point...the lyrics are deep not the most lyrical i seen from u but it still deep, the hooks ight not really catchy but its deep, overall this was an ight track...keep this shit up and keep expressin yourself like this...people also need ta feel u emotionally too thats one of the best things bout rap is the ability ta put ur emotion in it and truly express yourself not givin a fuck bout no one else's opinion but anyways this defintly not bad..keep at it
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Old 01-29-06, 06:26 PM   #5
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this beat is pretty good....... sounds familiar.... tell me y



Immortal Technique Harlem Streets


umm dope ass song.. u showed me ur verses.. and i told u i was talking to my mom.. biotch


lyrics are nice.. i actually thought u coulda went a little deeper on this topic, u just kinda scratched the surface, dope flow tho, the chorus is cool....good track... 8/10
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Old 01-29-06, 06:57 PM   #6
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damn, this shit's hawt...can't even say anything else really...
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Old 01-29-06, 09:12 PM   #7
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Nice beat, I heard it somewhere. But it's cool. Your flow hits off pretty good, nice and smooth and relaxed, I like it a lot. your emotion is unbelievable as well and that hook was pretty dope too. I love what you talkin bout on this track, very gospel type shit. A great story man, I'll possibly download this because it's a pretty dope single man.

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Old 01-30-06, 01:07 AM   #8
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thanks everyone....favors have been returned....up
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Old 01-30-06, 03:13 AM   #9
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Beats is dope...flow and delivery is nice...lyrics is dope...quality is coo...the hook is nice...over-all solid peice man keep it up.
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Old 01-30-06, 09:12 AM   #10
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hot shyt Ike, Im lovin that Hook, Lovin that hook, lyrics are dope, flow is on point, delivery is on point, shyt, this song makes me think you, this is one of the types of songs that i could play over and over and over, and never get tired of hearin tha same ol shyt good shyt yo

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Old 01-30-06, 02:46 PM   #11
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thanks everyone......favors are about to be returned....up
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Old 01-30-06, 11:32 PM   #12
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uppin for feed n links,,,,,
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Old 01-30-06, 11:47 PM   #13
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thanks everyone....favors have been returned....up



u didnt return the favor wit me....but yet again i dont have a song up
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Old 01-30-06, 11:57 PM   #14
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Heeeeey.

I'm listening to it right now. Nice choice in beat for the topic. Great way to just throw that shit out there, cause I agree with everything you're saying. Seriously man, shit is a dope way to approach the topic. Great emotion too. That sort of shit will get you somewhere, man. But anyway, the verses contents really make you think. You have great talent, man. Hook is pretty decent, right to the point. Like that one guy said, this you could just sit down and put on repeat. Dope man.

Don't need to RTF.
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Old 01-31-06, 02:22 AM   #15
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Iunno, the track sounds too much like you don't understand the Araibs point of view
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