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01-20-07, 09:12 PM | #3 | ||||
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nice fam...very deep piece you got here, well put togeather, on a
Philosophical tip fused with abstract metaphors and dope word choice, i note you concentrate a lot on end rhyme, id like to see a little more internals...though thats minor cause i think your style is pretty solid, couple of spelling errors...again minor but it stopped me reading so you should fix those.... Quote:
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and i think the qustions yo posed in different sections was the outstanding part of your script...like i said some deep shit in there...i laughed at the whole alien conspiracy theories part, yes i seen that shit too, the pyramids shit...overall just a dope drop...keep that shit up...peace |
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