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Old 04-02-05, 04:59 PM   #1
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How I feel about all these deaths...and in general...POEM

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between my left and right chest i feel strain
the lights dim in the room, and in my heart
i feel pain, and turmoil and terrible things
even a parable can't bring me out this peril
god's sparrow can't even sing, it's a bee sting
deep within, it's terminal and no one cares
i look up and see emptiness, no one is there
to meet eyes, to me, I'm incomplete, i'm
invisible like air, time I seek but i'm weak
and death surrounds me, whether real or dream
i was born alone and alone I be
i hope to see spring turn cold into heat
what is truly real, what I truly feel
is truly nill, nullified and void
an open space of silent noise, Lord
please save this soul of mine I cry
i don't know who i am now, I lie
i need your hand to hold me down when i
can't stand on my own, what is it to die
i feel it when i open my eyes



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Old 04-02-05, 06:55 PM   #2
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put this is in tha poem forum or somethin
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Old 04-03-05, 04:32 AM   #3
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WHO GIVES A SHIT??
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Old 04-03-05, 02:05 PM   #4
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You fucking emotional queer. Yes, I do know your homosexual.
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Old 04-03-05, 02:21 PM   #5
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doomsday ur sig is fuckin retarded about the pope...man u r dumb the kkk strings up catholics the same as they do to blacks
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Old 04-03-05, 02:24 PM   #6
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alright poem...............shud put it in the poetry section for proper feedback and shit
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Old 04-03-05, 02:31 PM   #7
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WHO GIVES A SHIT??



^ I have to agree.
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Old 04-03-05, 02:32 PM   #8
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doomsday ur sig is fuckin retarded about the pope...man u r dumb the kkk strings up catholics the same as they do to blacks


The sig is dope. The KKK should string up you.
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Old 04-03-05, 07:35 PM   #9
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redbull who told u to get off my nuts?..now get bak on
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