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Afterwords shit was generic an simple. Pussy ass punches, and weak structure.
JPoll's shit was more experienced, better structure an the shit weren't bitten.

Vote// JPoll

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i wuz up 3-0
then this cay went and recruited voters to tie 3-3
help close this ish....
drop an honest response and well return da fav
peace
uppin

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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst"

bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271

your such a fucking loser...just cause you got 3 people to vote on this...adn then there were 3 honest votes in favor of the winner...ME....bitch realize when you get merked

Afterword: good punches, and personals are good flow was nice too but our structure wasnt as good as poll's but still overall your punches stood out far better plus i liked the canada one with the raptors love that team vince carter rules but anway overall your post excelled far beyond the reach of Jpoll's.keep it up.

JPoll: dude wasnt feeling your punches even i can tell that was half assed and you could of done much better, good concepts but not worded well or hitting hard enough your overall performance was good but it was average not pow! or bam! excuse onemotapeia but you had hardly any good metaphors.but also dunt separate our bars dunt put spaces between 2 lines the only reason you had better structure was cause his was fuked but, keep at it peace.

Flow: afterword
Personals: afterword
Structure: j-poll
Punches: afterword

My Vote: Afterword

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uppin let's get this going....3 to 3...fucking newb votes...for him...bs

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Not a very good battle. Neither one of u went that hard. I didnt like either one of ya flows. A few good burners on both ya shit, but when it comes down to it i think jpoll had that part. Other than that nothing really stood out. Jpoll got a lttle more personal.
Afterword had a few more multis. Jpoll's lines got a lttle long, but when it was over had better punches so Jpoll gets my vote.

Hit up my battles. Links in sig.

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tight battle....sort of...well with the votes....but yeah let's get some more votes...

damm u niggaz aint goin da sleep till dis battle is closed lol aight umm battelw as okay could of been betta without all da bitchin and shit

opener-after...i dont know if u bit it
structure-j...after ya shit was type sloppy dunn
punchlines-after..hands down j i aint really see nun dunn
wordplay-umm j tried so i'll give dat 2 him
personals-a tie both of u ahd like wun or 2
creativity-after
enjoyed-...i gotta with after man...j u had a minute da come up with some shit but u didn't nahmean u probly get madd dat i aint vote 4 u but hey im only bein honest...after took dis shit

my vote-after.....and yo vote on wun of my fukkin battles yo after i voted on like 3 of ya shits dogg give a honest 2 mine...j u 2 dunn they links is in my sig

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

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lmaooo yo jpoll u'z a bitch dunny 4 real how u gon pm tellin me da vote on ya battle but when i do u gon put me on ya black list voter's lmaooooo rite after u saw u wasn't gettin my vote i dont give a fukk tho...GON

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

you were on mine b4 dis....when you didn't comment..and i did a mass pm...sorry for including your name

Yo Jpoll man i voted on this shit look out for other niggas man go vote on my shit while u waitn to close this

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