Voted For: Mystic.

FIRST OFF...LET ME BEGIN WITH A BIG LOL @ 2 OF MY NAMES BEING MENTIONED IN THIS ONE VERSE...

Im holdin that Slicknife everytime I swing im slicin at ya ribs
My Tech Skillz have ya brains hanging low like u was wit tha boy jibbs
--WAK WITH NO PUNCH..YOUR WHOLE VERSE IS JUST GIMICKS--
You switched ya style up real fast dog dont act like i didnt notice
But my Theory is you didnt write half of it..you bit and stole it
--DECENT PUNCH, JUST WORK ON YOUR WORDING--
Your better off changing your Eyedentity but still they'd pay-u-less
Shit mine aswell just give me the the ring...
...................n ill put an arrow through ya body n leave u leg-a-lus
--WAK...THANKS FOR THE 1ST NAMEDROP THOUGH--
You didnt elevate after takin a break...your punches just mys-tic
I could put my face up to your screen n u still couldnt hit it!
---1ST LINE SHOULD HAVE BEEN THE 2ND LINE---
Im winning this series you can't beat me...just try n match
ill give you a lil push to start Rawking....
................But its like shit hit the fan cuz you came flyin back!
---COULD HAVE WORDED BETTER...YOUR FLOW IS STRETCHED---
You rhymin whack you aint ill u dreamin like a fuckin Mimesis
You wont win damn didnt think it'd take u 2 times to realize this
---WAK NAME DROP--
So you wanted another shot i wont turn you down whore....fine
I would bold some more ppl who merked you...
.....................But shit im Precize and dont got any more lines
---STARTED OUT DECENT BUT YOU GAVE UP AT THE END---

ALL IN ALL YOUR VERSE WAS BELOW MEHHH...NOTHING HOT AT ALL. FROM WHAT i HEARD YOUR ILL AT TOPICAL BUT PUNCHLINE BATTLES AINT YOUR THING. THIS VERSE WOULD EASILY COST YOU A WIN BATTLING ANY NEWBIE. ELEVATE THE BATTLE SCENE MAN. THIS WONT GET TOO MANY VOTES.

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The link above show this kid been played with Dumblines
Battle Erel Avent an thought he could beat him with a Cum line...
--WORDING IS WAK BUT THE CONCEPT WAS OK...DONT RHYME THE WORD LINE WITH LINE EVER AGAIN---
He'll get revoked in this battle I provoked, choking like a first timer's smoke
This I quote, his skills beyond broke, even his avatar proves he's a pass joke...
--HE'LL GET REVOKED? WTF? YOU JUST THROWING WORDS AROUND MAN, WHOLE SHIT WAS WAK---
so really lets raise the stakes and spit venomous like u played with snakes
sprayed the eight, that'll leave more holes on ya then the foctory of crates.....
--RAISED THE 8? YOUR MULTIES ARE THERE IN THIS ONE BUT STOP SAYING STUPID SHIT THROW A FUCKING PUNCH MAN.--
When rex flexed his mad text, I smash necks then ask, "Next?"
His guns are full of shit, even his finger proves that he packs an "assed text" ......
---SELF GLORIFICATION IS WAK, ITS JUST A FILLER---
His whackness reminds me of a candy, the way he'll spit it "Now and Later"
No doubt I am greater, but mystic couldn't "elevate" if he wrote in elevators.....
---SUPER PLAYED, I USED BOTH THOSE PUNCHES WHEN I FIRST STARTED RAPPING---
Truth is, I spit congruent rhymes, that are fluent, while his come up truant
So just like mystic in Mexican empires, this kid and location will end up in ruins....
---STRETCHED...WAK...AND HOW THE FUCK ARE YOUR RHYMES CONGRUENT? DO YOU KNOW THE MEANING OR WHERE YOU JUST TOSSING IT IN THERE FOR THE PERPOSE OF MULTIES?--

YOUR VERSE JUST MADE ME BELIEVE THAT YOU DIDN'T WANT TO EVER ELEVATE. YOU NEED TO READ UP ON BATTLES AND SEE HOW PEOPLE WRITE THERE SET UPS AND DROP WITTY PUNCHES AT THE END. I MY SELF HAVE PROBLEMS WITH WORDING BUT YOU HAVE A PROBLEM WITH THE OVER ALL VERSE MAN. STOP AND THINK ABOUT WHAT YOU WRITE...READ IT AGAIN AND AGAIN IF YOU SERIOUSE ABOUT IT BEFORE YOU DROP AND THINK...WILL THIS VERSE DESTROY THE OTHER GUY OR ATLEAST BE ENOUGH TO GET THE WIN? YOU CYPHER VERSES AND BATTLE VERSES ARE TOO MUCH ALIKE AND THEY SHOULDN'T BE MAN. FOLLOW MY ADVICE COZ IF YOU JUST KEEP DOING WHAT YOUR DOING WRONG OVER AND OVER AND IT AINT WORKING STOP DOING THAT AND TRY SOMETHING ELSE MAN.

V/RICCARD

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

thanks for the feed and honest vote dude...uppin for more

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BItches RTF in some of my battle I got open...I got like 4 open....RT fucking F. lol...You too Rex...befor I slap the shit out of wolvarines helpless ass .lol..

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

^^^ i believe you just hate on me reguardless.........

if u aint see some of the punches your blind as fuck.....

upp'in for votes..........................

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Voted For: Mystic.

Im holdin that Slicknife everytime I swing im slicin at ya ribs
My Tech Skillz have ya brains hanging low like u was wit tha boy jibbs
^^ LOL, Funny 6/10
You switched ya style up real fast dog dont act like i didnt notice
But my Theory is you didnt write half of it..you bit and stole it
^^Played Concept, kinda weak 5/10
Your better off changing your Eyedentity but still they'd pay-u-less
Shit mine aswell just give me the the ring...
...................n ill put an arrow through ya body n leave u leg-a-
lus
^^^Supposed to ryme with payless...? Idk 5/10
You didnt elevate after takin a break...your punches just mys-tic
I could put my face up to your screen n u still couldnt hit it!
^^^Decent 7/10
Im winning this series you can't beat me...just try n match
ill give you a lil push to start Rawking....
................But its like shit hit the fan cuz you came flyin back!
You rhymin whack you aint ill u dreamin like a fuckin Mimesis
You wont win damn didnt think it'd take u 2 times to realize this
^^^ Funny, i liked alot 8/10, Decent wordplay
So you wanted another shot i wont turn you down whore....fine
I would bold some more ppl who merked you...
.....................But shit im Precize and dont got any more lines
^^^ Nice way to explain structure, Decent closer 8/10
AWSOME PERSONALL






The link above show this kid been played with Dumblines
Battle Erel Avent an thought he could beat him with a Cum line... LOL

^^^Cute, but made no sence, Jerkin off to text maybe? Idk on this one bro
All in all was funny 6/10

He'll get revoked in this battle I provoked, choking like a first timer's smoke
This I quote, his skills beyond broke, even his avatar proves he's a pass joke...
^^ Nice wordplay not overdone 8/10 Good personall 7/10

so really lets raise the stakes and spit venomous like u played with snakes
sprayed the eight, that'll leave more holes on ya then the foctory of crates.....
Decent punch, concept played 7/10
When rex flexed his mad text, I smash necks then ask, "Next?"
His guns are full of shit, even his finger proves that he packs an "assed text" ......
^^^ I see how you tried to get that to fit in the ryme sheme, but ass text
Is un-comprhrendable by some....5/10
His whackness reminds me of a candy, the way he'll spit it "Now and Later"
No doubt I am greater, but mystic couldn't "elevate" if he wrote in elevators.....
LOL^^^ VERY NICE, BEST LINE BY THE WAY 9/10
Truth is, I spit congruent rhymes, that are fluent, while his come up truant
So just like mystic in Mexican empires, this kid and location will end up in ruins.... EZ... MOTHER FUCKER...
^^ Nice name play....Ryme scheme worked....7/10


Alright, Mystic your whole ".........." Structure threw me off a little so i had to go back and read it again
Your closing line concept was a lil basic but fit really well......

REXLESS..... My favorite line of yours was " His whackness reminds me of a candy, the way he'll spit it "Now and Later"
No doubt I am greater, but mystic couldn't "elevate" if he wrote in elevators"

MYSTIC: My favorite line of yours was wanted another shot i wont turn you down whore....fine
I would bold some more ppl who merked you...
.....................But shit im Precize and dont got any more lines


MY VOTE....NOW AS UNDERSTOOD, I BELIVE REXLESS HAD BETTER PUNCHES, MYSTIC CAME REAL HARD ON PERSONALS, REXLESS
HAS BETTER STRUCTURE, AND A MORE VISONARY RYMESCHEME, BUT I HAVE TO SAY I AM GIVING THIS VOTE TO MYSIC...
THE CREATIVITY YOU USED BRO IN HIS OTHER OPPENENTS NAMES I NEVER SEEN BEFORE, I ACTULLY WANT
TO DO SOMTHING LIKE THIS IN THE NEAR FUTURE, 10 FOR CREATIVITY, AT FIRST I DIDENT REALIZE IT
WAS HIS OTHERS OPPENENTS TILL I WENT AND CHECKED...........

VOTE/ RICHARD

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upp'in for more votes from others then the same 3????????
but thanks for letting me know i had the best punch in the battle an lost some how??
guess personals now a days are better then punches??
eeeh.....

upp'in............

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stop complaining.

upping for more votes. preferably 1 more

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Naw...I based it more on his creativity......... Using those names like that

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Rex I aint hating on you man...thats the attitude that keeps you from coming up. I gave you advice ...you can either take it and do something with it or act all emotional over the net like if people are actually out to get you. I dont beef with people no more and I wont battle you any more for free wins. if you want just go to the league and request a special match against me...maybe IP ban match if you your shit was that hard to the point that Im just hating. do what you want to do ...Either way I dont care much. Now RTF in one of my fucking battles bitches...

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uppping.....dude ive rtf lol.....if i see more battles open ill drop an honest vote or w/e

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