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Check in by: 08-05-04 at 01:59 PM

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Sinner has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 01:30 PM.

J2theG has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 01:54 PM.

now how can this chump here be a fuckin artist
when I found out his whole famly are retardists
serously what percessed you to pick such a name
it's really gay J2theG now people isn't dat just lame
you think your da best rapper thinking your eminem
you really stink and act adult when your a infent
I bet your an ugly mutha fucker n ur mums a hooker
I bet you got da looks of your mum dats a bad looker
sorry did I offend you good! it was all done intentional
I don't care i'm trying to piss you off cuz your un cool
you have no crew so u know people gona shit on you
my crew will waste you and make you get ur mum abused
it's sickning how you would want............ to battle me
cause your gonna take this personally your not adultry
i'll have you this bitch beaten, and then nailed crusified
blow up your famly with nukes and make ur friends terified

u call urself sinner, haha shit please
i bet u at church every day down on ur knees
a motha fuking choire boy sukin off the vicar
u cant mess wid me, nobody's fukin slicker
comin challengin me? hu u fukin fink u r?
watch out wen ma windows r down on ma car
im the master motha fuker, the ruler of the game
everyones gona kno me, no one knows ur name
face it boi, just quit while ur head
carry on like this u gon whind up dead
so dont bother spittin bak bitch, u kno u gon loose
i aint kiddin, u do, yo gon pay ur dues

upping this shit..................................

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Voted For: Sinner

Sinner takes this battle. He had some good vocab and a good structure ta go with it. He got J on the punches too. Nice structure and flow. It really flowed nicely and appealed ta me as the reader. J came kinda weak. Elevate. Good structures on both sides but Sinner takes this.

Vote - Sinner

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137099

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Postin some feedback, too weak of a battle for me to vote on...both of your drops were weak with no good punches and made up personals...if your gonna make an attack at his character get your facts straight, you both need to elevate a lot..but at least you guys are both newbs so this battles good practice...no hatin just keep on elevatin..use multis n metas n your battles and try to use some wordplay too

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Voted For: Sinner

uh yo dis shit was kinda close but both yall cud elevate sum,

but uh

structure-uh tie
flo-sinna
punches-well there werent alot but Sinna had some
vocab-sinna
wordplay-sinna

yo man goodbattle yall return da favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140117

iite, v/sinna

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Emergin, why dont you learn how to vote right...every one of your votes i see has inadequate feedback...i know you just joined a month ago, but damn...are you slow or just retarded?

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yo yo appriciate ur feed bak yo. man i agree, i didnt perform well on dat shit. it was a bad battle, i just got 2 distracted. yo sinner i want anutha match sumtime yo.

peace

Voted For: J2theG

they was both good, both had flow both had rhyme but JstheG's made me laugh "a motha fuking choire boy sukin off the vicar" lol , Sinner yours was good 2 but i just wasent feeling it as much