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Old 01-23-06, 02:18 AM   #1
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2. N.Tavarez vs. 12. FuxJustAWord

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Check in by Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Drop verse by Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.

24 Lines.

No Recycling.
No Biting.
No Feeding.

Good Luck..

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Old 01-23-06, 12:20 PM   #2
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rob we cool, nice verse but next time quote a bar taken from an actual
textcee or rapper.......not courtney love

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Old 01-23-06, 08:39 PM   #3
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check...........
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Old 01-24-06, 08:16 AM   #4
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24 lines correct?
let me know when u can drop so no confusion this round
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Old 01-27-06, 10:25 PM   #5
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Aight dog, Round 6 between us



Already lost 4 outta 5 but I'll gladly hand you one to go
And he wont take it personal....he ran outta those months ago
Bet he'll say I cheated, dog my skill level guided me thru
But the next joke I take off a site...ll be YOU
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Fuck where you from son the shook fall clean
It's true Chicago bears it in this tourney...
.........Only to end up like the football team!
Visualize how Eye-test em in a fighters combat
He proposed the right Solution...If what u have is dried up contacts
Radio play in the Chi? Ha! their all gonna laugh at ya
You've been Blackballed more often than a homo in Africa
Its now time for your yearly departure , planned to go
I'll make you "clock out" so fast Flavor Flav'll give me a standing O'
Aint a pimp in your town kid you got no play
U'd think he's spanish, the way he make the Chica-go way
Ya wife pouting , Ill let her leave when her vagina is pounding
I call her "Cliffhanger" shes always down for Climbing and Mountain
Derailed your rise to the top dog you've reached ya Peak Queer
The stakes is high.....and u cant afford to spend another Week Here
I've caused Fux so many 'Title waves' u'd think a damn Tsunami came in
Step, I'll break ya feet and leave ya sox red quicker than Johnny Damon*
If this wiseguys in Chi, that mean Im earning my pay
and Al Cap-one in ya ass fast he'll turn in his grave
Dog we homies but I'm ending you first
............................cuz for the Trophe'
I'ma ghost U out the tourney like a Mimesis verse


*for the US sports challenged (vaskez )
johnny damon=red sox player that went to yankees
chicago bears= nfl team that lost in playoffs
drop soon
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Old 01-28-06, 01:18 AM   #6
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And Reds keepin his buds in the tourney, who u tryna fool bitch
I thought it was only solo Bull……… but now its just Bullshh!
U aint gon makin it wit those punches, im comin wit headshots
So after im done with ur candy ass ima go eat up Red, Hot
Fuckin faggots, now, don’t get too cocky while ur suckin dicks
Cuz last time kid was a hot shot…he was with this fuckin kid
And yea, I know it’s a link line, but enjoy and show hospitality
Cuz only way Hotll have Pr, is because its his nationality
I dunno why kids are up on ur dick, they must be fuckin dumb
Cuz kids say they love ur lines…..
…….... or maybe thats who u got em from
I unno why they rankin u better, but I aint one to test now
Or ill just go and do a 1-2 step……. right into the next round
And Hot's girl wants to have my babies, are u crazy coward
Sprayin my seeds on her face only time shell have a baby shower
Hot, quit lyin, man u don’t smoke any shit, we all fuckin know
But he does hit those buds…….. wen he hits them up for votes
Hots a fuckin comedian, but not for rap, cuz his text’s worse
So watch out for Speks Joke of the day…. in Hots’ next verse
Hots so heated over cheatin that he'll soon be sent to hell
N' he could be a Hot head, but we know cooler heads prevail
Aint no girls likin Hot, kid… we know that u aint pullin a chick
So if you’re Haughty, man……........…….ur really just full of shit
Yea i find it funny how ur in this battle, but start showin a frown
Cuz U'll lose this once u get serious and quit fuckin jokin a round

Haughty – means ur full of urself

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Old 01-28-06, 01:17 PM   #7
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aiight let's peep this:

hotshhh:
Already lost 4 outta 5 but I'll gladly hand you one to go
And he wont take it personal....he ran outta those months ago
lol... nicely put... 7/10
Bet he'll say I cheated, dog my skill level guided me thru
But the next joke I take off a site...ll be YOU
good, hits harder to fux, cuz he the one who accused you. 6/10
Fuck where you from son the shook fall clean
It's true Chicago bears it in this tourney...
.........Only to end up like the football team!
lol nice wordplay....... 6/10
Visualize how Eye-test em in a fighters combat
He proposed the right Solution...If what u have is dried up contacts
good wordplay again..... 6/10
Radio play in the Chi? Ha! their all gonna laugh at ya
You've been Blackballed more often than a homo in Africa
it's coo..... 5/10
Its now time for your yearly departure , planned to go
I'll make you "clock out" so fast Flavor Flav'll give me a standing O'
coo....... 5/10
Aint a pimp in your town kid you got no play
U'd think he's spanish, the way he make the Chica-go way
lmao word..... good shit w/ chicago wordplay... lol 8/10
Ya wife pouting , Ill let her leave when her vagina is pounding
I call her "Cliffhanger" shes always down for Climbing and Mountain
LOL good, except it's not a diss to him, his girl. still dope tho 7/10
Derailed your rise to the top dog you've reached ya Peak Queer
The stakes is high.....and u cant afford to spend another Week Here
coo........ 5/10
I've caused Fux so many 'Title waves' u'd think a damn Tsunami came in
Step, I'll break ya feet and leave ya sox red quicker than Johnny Damon*
lol fuck the Red Sox..... 7/10
If this wiseguys in Chi, that mean Im earning my pay
and Al Cap-one in ya ass fast he'll turn in his grave
damn, just dope wordplay....... 8/10
Dog we homies but I'm ending you first
............................cuz for the Trophe'
I'ma ghost U out the tourney like a Mimesis verse
lool nice..... 7/10

OVerall, you came with that hot shit yo.... really feeling it. Came REAL consistent i think.. didn't really have any wack punches, had a few that stood out tho. good shit..... overall 77/120 (64%)


Now onto Fux:

And Reds keepin his buds in the tourney, who u tryna fool bitch
I thought it was only solo Bull……… but now its just Bullshh!
lmao... pretty dope....... 8/10
U aint gon makin it wit those punches, im comin wit headshots
So after im done with ur candy ass ima go eat up Red, Hot
ehh.... is ok.... i get it, but it's coo..... 5/10
Fuckin faggots, now, don’t get too cocky while ur suckin dicks
Cuz last time kid was a hot shot…he was with this fuckin kid
no.... links are so played now, it's stupid. i peeped it, and it really wasn't that great to use this. should of left out.... 3/10
And yea, I know it’s a link line, but enjoy and show hospitality
Cuz only way Hotll have Pr, is because its his nationality
coo wordplay..... 6/10
I dunno why kids are up on ur dick, they must be fuckin dumb
Cuz kids say they love ur lines…..
…….... or maybe thats who u got em from
lol haha.... nice 7/10
I unno why they rankin u better, but I aint one to test now
Or ill just go and do a 1-2 step……. right into the next round
it's coo..... nice play off rankin....... 6/10
And Hot's girl wants to have my babies, are u crazy coward
Sprayin my seeds on her face only time shell have a baby shower
shit's coo, did same as hot with dissing girl, not really diss to him, so 6/10
Hot, quit lyin, man u don’t smoke any shit, we all fuckin know
But he does hit those buds…….. wen he hits them up for votes
shit's coo.... asking to vote lines played, but good flip on it 6/10
Hots a fuckin comedian, but not for rap, cuz his text’s worse
So watch out for Speks Joke of the day…. in Hots’ next verse
nice....... 6/10
Hots so heated over cheatin that he'll soon be sent to hell
N' he could be a Hot head, but we know cooler heads prevail
good flip here. like it........ 6/10
Aint no girls likin Hot, kid… we know that u aint pullin a chick
So if you’re Haughty, man……........…….ur really just full of shit
nice.... staying consistent 6/10
Yea i find it funny how ur in this battle, but start showin a frown
Cuz U'll lose this once u get serious and quit fuckin jokin a round
good closer........ coo shit......... 7/10

Overal, good shit. you started with dope line, then fell off a lot, but then picked it up and finished pretty consisten. pretty nice verse, man... OVeraL: 71/120 (59%)


Quotables (8/10):

Hot:
Aint a pimp in your town kid you got no play
U'd think he's spanish, the way he make the Chica-go way
If this wiseguys in Chi, that mean Im earning my pay
and Al Cap-one in ya ass fast he'll turn in his grave

Fux:
And Reds keepin his buds in the tourney, who u tryna fool bitch
I thought it was only solo Bull……… but now its just Bullshh!

Overall, REALLY nice battle. real dope by both. good shit.... really enjoyed battle. Both stayed really consistent, but fux fell off a lot near beginnin' while hot jus stayed really consistet throughout. so Hot edges fux out IMO. good battle by both. stay up.

v/Hotshhh
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Old 01-28-06, 02:35 PM   #8
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Already lost 4 outta 5 but I'll gladly hand you one to go
And he wont take it personal....he ran outta those months ago
Visualize how Eye-test em in a fighters combat
He proposed the right Solution...If what u have is dried up contacts
Aint a pimp in your town kid you got no play
U'd think he's spanish, the way he make the Chica-go way (sorta forced)
Dog we homies but I'm ending you first
............................cuz for the Trophe'
I'ma ghost U out the tourney like a Mimesis verse

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dunno why kids are up on ur dick, they must be fuckin dumb
Cuz kids say they love ur lines…..
…….... or maybe thats who u got em from
Hot, quit lyin, man u don’t smoke any shit, we all fuckin know
But he does hit those buds…….. wen he hits them up for votes
Hots a fuckin comedian, but not for rap, cuz his text’s worse
So watch out for Speks Joke of the day…. in Hots’ next verse

Closer than it should have been but hotshh took this, decent battle lads

V./ Hotshh.
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Old 01-29-06, 08:36 AM   #9
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Bet he'll say I cheated, dog my skill level guided me thru
But the next joke I take off a site...ll be YOU
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Visualize how Eye-test em in a fighters combat
He proposed the right Solution...If what u have is dried up contacts
Radio play in the Chi? Ha! their all gonna laugh at ya
You've been Blackballed more often than a homo in Africa
Aint a pimp in your town kid you got no play
U'd think he's spanish, the way he make the Chica-go way
Derailed your rise to the top dog you've reached ya Peak Queer
The stakes is high.....and u cant afford to spend another Week Here
(5)

*for the US sports challenged (vaskez )
johnny damon=red sox player that went to yankees
chicago bears= nfl team that lost in playoffs
drop soon
^^if this was King Solo he'd be saying "you shouldn't fuckin use disses that can't be understood everywhere"

If this wiseguys in Chi, that mean Im earning my pay
and Al Cap-one in ya ass fast he'll turn in his grave
^^this was forced as hell


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And Reds keepin his buds in the tourney, who u tryna fool bitch
I thought it was only solo Bull……… but now its just Bullshh!
Fuckin faggots, now, don’t get too cocky while ur suckin dicks
Cuz last time kid was a hot shot…he was with this fuckin kid
And yea, I know it’s a link line, but enjoy and show hospitality
Cuz only way Hotll have Pr, is because its his nationality
Hots a fuckin comedian, but not for rap, cuz his text’s worse
So watch out for Speks Joke of the day…. in Hots’ next verse
Aint no girls likin Hot, kid… we know that u aint pullin a chick
So if you’re Haughty, man……........…….ur really just full of shit
(5)


equal on quotables but hot had less "meh" lines and more varied concepts

v/hot
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Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel
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Old 01-30-06, 12:46 AM   #10
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N.Tavarez wins and advances.
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Old 01-30-06, 12:47 AM   #11
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Old 01-30-06, 12:47 AM   #12
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