check aight nigga im showin this week

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Ok man, I know you love this, please dont make me start on son
RV memories?...
like when your unlovin parents threw you out of 1
04 join date... well i can see why you have the aggression
bein the worst thing outta 04 since the bush reelection
hes no threat more like a bye, thats beat
this is just a gift from kempo for stealin my win last week
Get outta here dork, i seen the handicap shit on this fucka's car
coz any bitch that could see would skip the lou... like the rucker star
haha kid's a joke... destined to lose... sprayin tikes
coz L was his initial respone... when he registered at the site
Maybe i should fear this vet, he even make his chrome twerk
nah, this kid's in on thursday night...doing his home werk

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3120340
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237918
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237921
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237987

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Welcome to Rapverse General Hospital, im leavin ya body under the morgue
This is hip hop come wit that jazz shit and we throwin you out of the door
You told my young bull check where you lived and see if he'd walk about it
well i'm from southwest philly bitch and i aint gotta boast about it
everyone sees a lot of promise in you but you got no chance to win
its like you hot a 50 inch vertical but you cant even touch the rim
so fuck the technicality shit
you can vote on 30 battles ima vote on none, and you still wouldnt get a win out of it
see i rack up points like JJ Redick paint pictures like JJ evans
i get votes the old fashioned way you ride dick like Karin Steffans
I'm mentally deciding this battle while you're stuck in a rut in a free fall
leavin it more one sided than uncle phil and nicky playin on the see saw
Its been plenty victims that i've had to turn my wrath on and now you
ya initials is U-P the exact opposite of ya stock value
you're heavily favored to win, so maybe i should no show
then it'll take more to beat me than a verse about bein a homo
so fall back to your bel air mansion, try to take a loss in stride.
ya meal ticket came last week but you fucked up and lost your ride

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^^^ my clock said 11:59

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uppin for votes

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coz any bitch that could see would skip the lou... like the rucker star

this was the only thing worth quoting and it was weak at that. the set up for it was completly irrelevant

Phil - Uggghh wording killed your verse... i used to not understand what ppl meant by it when they said my wording used to fuck up my punchlines... but learn it fast. Your opener could have been hot but I ono you really butchered it. and the 04/bush re election too. you got the concepts, they just didn't connect for me when the really could have.

Luse - Whoooaaaa. Stop whatever it is your doing. Now. 1.) Your lines are streeeetched the fuck out. Fix that 2.) This is hip hop come wit that jazz shit and we throwin you out of the door//well i'm from southwest philly bitch and i aint gotta boast about it//its like you hot a 50 inch vertical but you cant even touch the rim//leavin it more one sided than uncle phil and nicky playin on the see saw//then it'll take more to beat me than a verse about bein a homo - Stop ALLLL that. It's cool to see your from SW... i grew up in SW now i live out by 69... but back to your verse... Your the complete opposite of Phil, you got good set ups... but your punchlines are like 'are you serious?' you really need to take stock on some of the battles you voted (Comedian and I for example) and just try and form a style over it because on this site, punches will win or lose you a battle.

Vote - Uncle Phil

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"Only god can judge me, but I'm atheist so you do the math..."

i see what u talkin bout, this is jus till i get back to audio my lines is stretched because i switch up my style a lot

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04 join date... well i can see why you have the aggression
bein the worst thing outta 04 since the bush reelection
^ DANG, DAMN HARSH
Get outta here dork, i seen the handicap shit on this fucka's car
coz any bitch that could see would skip the lou... like the rucker star
^NICE NAME DISS


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I'm mentally deciding this battle while you're stuck in a rut in a free fall
leavin it more one sided than uncle phil and nicky playin on the see saw
^ THAT WAS A DECENT LINE WHEN I THOUGHT ABOUT WHO THE FUCK NICKY WAS





V/ Uncle Phil

He Just Had more Good Lines Than Luse Did

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hes no threat more like a bye, thats beat
this is just a gift from kempo for stealin my win last week
Get outta here dork, i seen the handicap shit on this fucka's car
coz any bitch that could see would skip the lou... like the rucker star

vs.

nothing.


i expected luse cannon to be better honestly..
.. i'm sure i've seen uncle phil come better over on bw i think it was, so maybe he wasn't trying, but imo he didn't come too great either. i'd agree with ace on the set up shit. for both of the punches i quoted you could've wrote a set up which related to em easily. but yea, uncil phil should get the w on this one - as long as he votes.



v/ uncle phil.

Uncle Phil gets my vote, generally for his better concepts. Poor execution, though - for both of you. Luse didn't really bring anything hot - or any worthy attempts. Phil won off from the opening couplet... Although the wording is pretty rough it was still enough to easily win.


Vote: Uncle Phil.

uncle phil

hes no threat more like a bye, thats beat
this is just a gift from kempo for stealin my win last week
Get outta here dork, i seen the handicap shit on this fucka's car
coz any bitch that could see would skip the lou... like the rucker star


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Cannon


I'm mentally deciding this battle while you're stuck in a rut in a free fall
leavin it more one sided than uncle phil and nicky playin on the see saw


^^that line is juss silly man lol...it's pretty stretched i was feeling ur verse Luse.. didn't feel the wording ...nice try tho....uncle phil came aightttt....good enuff to win

vote-phil

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