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10-02-04, 12:36 PM
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IP: 5867 FD83
Feedback Granted:
overall was on the better half of the scale. ya said the word feel too many times. but thats alright, ya girl must've felt very special once she read it, ya have nice perception, and nice insight, i wish ya wouldnt have declined our battle, i dropped a decent topical, that would have gave ya a challenge to beat, bu eh...ya focus was internal: had depth and had blunt statments. more similies and metaphors and itll be an 'A' paper. thats verb's feedback. pz.
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10-02-04, 12:43 PM
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Yo Limit We Might Be Enimies
But Dis An Tight An Str8 From Da Heart Piece Keep It Up U Had Deep Feelings And Good Flow ~peace~ |
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10-04-04, 03:24 PM
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IP: 87C5 5C3A
^^Enemies?
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11-24-04, 02:07 PM
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FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr
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cho mayn...nice shit...has ure girl seen that? you shud let her read that mayn...8/10, keep droppin G...~1~
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11-25-04, 04:19 AM
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Man that was some soppy shit...lol na was emotinal nice drop flow on point wordplay nice structure was dope lyrics were decent this was a nice drop almost made me shed a tear..but i have no heart but lyrically...nice piece keep em comin...and don't die
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11-29-04, 08:23 PM
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FuxJustAWord
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that was some pretty nice shit..... i juss saw this in ur sig so i unno how old this is... did u show it to her??? cuz that shit was great.... nice metaphors and such... and u can feel the emotion in ur thing..... real good closer, u know definately how to write.... might be more of a poet than a rapper, i dont need to tell u, but keep doin ur thing anyways
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12-08-04, 09:30 PM
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IP: 03A1 A28A
God...it kills to see this shit...holy fuck...
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