Rules:
10 lines max
No d/r votes
No hate votes
No crew votes
you spit first
i'll drop asap after

good luck homie

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ight, ....just saw the thread..........checkin in

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ight i'm checked in........ i'll spit after u do..... i'm in school so if u spit and i dont reply right away dont worry its not a no show...........................................

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No1 will see you shine when you're always "left behind" like D-12 in your sig
Got fucked by Eazy E now he's "spreadin Illness so quick"
(EzE had HIV)
Rockin herbs in ya Avatar doesnt mean your doper than weed
merking this man and all he can say to me is "How can this be?"
Couldnt catch yer flow even I left you wit blood gushin out ya vein
Look at his name....what can he bring? What? 30 ounces of pain?
Thinks he can hold his own weight cuz he fondled his genitals I Bet
keyin his verse with one finger crossed [H]opin [I]m not a [V]et

okay
Sayin you ill....is like lookin for dirt specks in black clothin, it's not really obvious
I got more punches than Bruce Lee but if I see you and he I'm leave holes in ya [buddy Lee 'n' Nauticas]

no prob, im in school also......


drop when u can


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ayo, repostin the verse (its da same shit just chopped off like 1 word for da flow, did it in class thats y)

THIS iS THE REAL VERSE

No1 sees you shine when you're always "left behind" like D-12 in your sig
Got fucked by Eazy E now he's "spreadin Illness so quick"
(EzE had HIV)
Rockin herbs in ya Avatar doesnt mean you're doper than weed
merking this man and all he can say to me is "How can this be?"
Couldnt catch yer flow if I left you wit blood gushin out ya vein
Look at his name...what can he bring?...30 ounces of pain???
Thinks he [holds his own weight] cuz he fondled his genitals I bet
Keyin his verse with one finger crossed [H]opin [I]m not a [V]et

okay
(diff flow here)
Sayin you ill....is like lookin for dirt specks in black clothin, it's not really obvious
I got more punches than Bruce Lee but if I see you and he I'm leave holes in ya [buddy Lee 'n' Nauticas]

ight man thanks for the time..... sorry took so long

Good Luck

Your name aint correct... cause u aint battled me before
Now do you C Drama homie... And this is just one metaphore
With a sig full of herb wins... i wouldnt rep that publicly
After 2 ups... i go up 2-0... so u stopped at uppin 3
You steppin to a vet... dissin my crew more than u did me
Dissin bout HIVs... Man you ain't even elite enough for a custom avy
[his avy is a default when u sign up]
Tellin me you're in school... they teachin u how to build fences?
With 18.83 posts a day... Whose gon pay for those kind of expenses?
6-7 and considered a heavy weight for havin nothin better to do then post
You rhymes always come short on punches so you jot them down on sticky notes

And that... is word... like whoa

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I got more punches than Bruce Lee but if I see you and he I'm leave holes in ya [buddy Lee 'n' Nauticas]

LMAO at c drama
ahah that was good i felt your verse fell together very well
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token

Now do you C Drama homie... And this is just one metaphore
that an your AVY line were both decent

on the vote
for creativity purposees mainly i vote C

Hmm...
Not a Very Explained Vote
But Honest Vote I Guess

Uppin 1
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wasnt feelin c drama........not really at all..........you need lots structure work.........token punches hit alot harder......best opener in this battle.....better closure.........

harder hitting puches=winner

winner=token

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werd..........pollin for this vote.....

pretty dope battle from u both....C Drama had some tight punches....Token had more personals, better vocabulary, and better multis......u both had a good flow but i think Token got it since his lines weren't as stretched....so here's a breakdown for u two....

Multis - Token
Metas - C Drama
Personals - Token
Punches - C Drama
Wordplay - C Drama
RhymeScheme - Token
Flow - Token
Vocabulary - Token
Overall - Token

good battle....but Token gets my vote due to winning in a majority of categories.....nice shit from u both though....

peace
4:20

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ya, dis would prolly b da first time i'd agree wit ppl when dey say my flow was offish, but neways...........

uppin for more votes on this one tho

uppin 2................................................. ..................................................

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