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01-17-05, 01:17 PM
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..::shut the fuck up::..
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Fed Up
IP: 07E0 A9F2
Sometimes I think theres nothing to live for I'm not sure whats in store whats at my door Wish I could could block everything and ingore im sitting here on the floor just madly bored with nothing to do and I feel so so mad I don't even get a chance to see my dad So you've got to understand my circumstances and that I feel so weak im running outta answers all I feel is anger that I feel that is building up im trapped at home n feel like im'a blow this ceiling up Lifes pure pressure and im'a afraid there is no cure my opinions are always pure but sometimes not always sure I'm now living wid a step dad and I just hate him so bad can't wait until he' dies till that day I will be so glad cause he treats me like trash n he's just a fuckin bum i'll shoot his ass with a gun to burry this stupid dum im not askin for much I just want a little respect so you can detect a decent person here 4 a sec But I don't care I really don't feel I have much interest you seem to enjoy my stress when you feel to test thats bwhy im standing and In still gonna keep demanding your not gonna push my buttons im'a keep on landing you gotta realist im not happy about shit thats happened thats why I keep rapping to show the world im acting And I won't stop till I get some hapniness while im alive im sick of everyone life for ne is really trying to survive but instead I get bribed and believe me ive really tried but everyday seems the same I feel like that im tied fuck I mean my soul has died im always to petrified ive been lied to know one ever seems to see my true side Last edited by Effect : 01-18-05 at 04:36 PM. |
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01-17-05, 02:44 PM
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Picasso Of Poetry
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IP: E499 D7BF
Improve your vocab, not bad...but it was too simplistic.
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01-17-05, 02:49 PM
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Picasso Of Poetry
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IP: E499 D7BF
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01-17-05, 02:51 PM
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..::shut the fuck up::..
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
ok you can set the battle up since your so big headed. I don't like it when u don't even make sense my shit was far from basic.
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01-17-05, 02:56 PM
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Picasso Of Poetry
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IP: E499 D7BF
Alright then, 8 line's.....you sure?
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