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Old 07-11-04, 09:58 PM   #1
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Old 07-13-04, 12:17 AM   #2
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Old 07-13-04, 04:44 AM   #3
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Old 07-14-04, 04:37 PM   #4
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im gona go today...1 bar...go today or tomarow so the votes can get done...

with words that slay,you could only 'marvol-us' if 'spider man' was my name//
and after this battle my crew would have given you '2 losses', so i'll call you 'cool j'//


spider man and marvol comics....
LL cool J=two L's
 
Old 07-14-04, 05:09 PM   #5
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lol name and cool j ryhme??? okay my go!

virt is a week strange guy,u nice? nah i think some of ya teamates high-
he luv his "crew" & like dem "tattoo's on allen's body" he neva gon leave "a.i"-

*a.i=authentik intelligance his crew and a.i=allen iverson....and his tattoo's is 4 life u'll get da punch...GON
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Old 07-14-04, 05:17 PM   #6
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with words that slay,you could only 'marvol-us' if 'spider man' was my name//
and after this battle my crew would have given you '2 losses', so i'll call you 'cool j'//

^^^good wordplay wit the first bar...the whole marvel-comics thing is kinda played but u made it work great with his name
ur second bar was pretty tight also...more good wordplay and the punch was there

pretty tight 8.3/10

u mad? cuzz da kidd in queens stay fly,u nice nah i think some of ya teamates high-
virt luv his crew da he like dem "tattoo's on allen's body" he neva gon leave "a.i"-

^^^1st bar blah...flow was choppy and the set-up was kinda weak
2nd bar-i see what u were tryin to do with the a.i-allen iverson tat thing...but where was the punch? whats wrong wit bein down wit ya crew and supportin it and bein loyal? especially when A.I. is one of the best on this board...i wasnt feelin ya punch
5.5/10

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Old 07-14-04, 05:24 PM   #7
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J and name ryhme...uppin for votes 1-0 virt
 
Old 07-14-04, 05:42 PM   #8
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lmaoooo how does J and NAME ryhme nigga???
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Old 07-14-04, 05:53 PM   #9
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vote marv...

his shit was just neetah all the way around......
virt you did ight but you can do bettah
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Old 07-14-04, 06:26 PM   #10
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Virt - that was stretched....nice meta....and creativity....but it didnt rhyme that well....i see how u sayin it rhymes...but not that great....decent punch....flow was off....give it a 6.3/10...

Marvolous - the punch didnt hit hard!....u coulda easily beat him if u had a nice punch....but u didnt....and ur flow was as bad as his....i give ur ish a 5.3/10....

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Old 07-14-04, 07:19 PM   #11
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with words that slay,you could only 'marvol-us' if 'spider man' was my name//
and after this battle my crew would have given you '2 losses', so i'll call you 'cool j'//

Explanation:

whoa that was a hot punch in my opinion the 2nd line was a
lil stretched but not much so its aight...............................
flow was pretty good....but the best thing about this punch
was the ill wordplay & a hard hitting punch also very original
and creative I haven't heard anything like this before so
its hot! made me laugh also lol

Rating: 8/10


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virt is a week strange guy,u nice? nah i think some of ya teamates high-
he luv his "crew" & like dem "tattoo's on allen's body" he neva gon leave "a.i"-

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aight its stretched aswell but I don't give a fuck about that
shit anywayz.....flow was ok at best.................................
aight....I could thought of that punch therefore no original
to me sorry.....punch wasn't very hard hitting due to the
fact you basically didn't really diss him hard! you just spitted
he won't eva leave his crew...........................................

Rating: 5/10


Vote Goes To: Virt (DUE TO A HARD-HITTING PUNCH..)
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Old 07-14-04, 06:50 PM   #12
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2-1..uppin

do we go to 5 votes?
 
Old 07-14-04, 06:52 PM   #13
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no...first to get ahead by 6....KO = 8-0...
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Old 07-14-04, 07:34 PM   #14
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lmaooo yo "rappin" is when u amke ya words "ryhme" he didn't ryhme...da nigga was basically talkin..and dude forsaken said he "couldn't think of dat" but then say it "aint original" whut da fuk is dat...3-1
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Old 07-14-04, 07:40 PM   #15
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I misspelled it I was rushing the typing fam......

I meant to say "Could"
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