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CHECK IN and you got 40 min. maximum to write a keystyle. this means you gotta right it on the spot, nothing prewritten. but if you remember some stuff from the past that is alrite. peace....no bar limit....may the best man win.........

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Yo

Ikeda sit down boi, Ace Diamond the new kid
Its gonna get messy, so baby lemme get u a new bib

U choke and cough
When I rhyme girls clothes be taken -off
U suck at flowin thats why ur funds have been cuttin-off

If I flow nicely,u must be rather bumpy
Ur mom so fat I be callin her Humpty Dumpty

But she didnt sit on the wall, she fell right thru
Then she had a screwed up baby, ahah and it was u

Ur the pussy that everyone talks about, cuz u still suckin on tits
No need to cry over this...
We know u cant make hits ....

Ur lame man, those punches will never reach
Me fighting you, is like Lenox Lewis boxing Screech


U rocking a St. Louis hat, acting like your from the south
Talk louder man, I cant hear with that dick shoved down ur mouth

I dont even wanna diss you know we bus- riders
But when it comes to ur mom they call me, muff-divers

Going down wit no oxygen, smellin like a skunk
Quite rapping boi, go back to Jazz and Punk

When I rap its do -or -die
I look my oponent straight- in- the -eye
I kill ya wit ya own sam-ur-ai

Don't get it twisted like dem Mobb Deep Boyzz
Peoples sit down when they hear ur noise

I make the crowd jump, u make em twirl their gum
And I heard wat Reena said when u was about to cum
She said "Ull either finish to quickly, or never finish -it"
My nicknames Caca cuz they now i am the illest- shit

Your like awful skaters I’ll have you crashed-into-these-“boards”
I ain’t afraid to battle any emcee like I been-to-the-wars

You’re new to this game like the Charlotte Bobcats
Your wackness could have forced Run DMC to stop-rap

You getting a win is as rare as flipping an “ace diamond”
It’s time-then to see that you can’t rap even if you had rhyme-pen
Take it easy on weak emcees like I faced kind-men

You could type with your brain, and still not “show intelligence”
Your rhymes have no-relevance, put a Caddy symbol on ‘em to flow-elegant

You aren’t the number one diamond so please be-gone
Cause the real ace diamond’s found somewhere under the ground of Sierra Leone….

Ikeda sit down boi, Ace Diamond the new kid
Its gonna get messy, so baby lemme get u a new bib
^^ well thats not a punch, fill your verse with punches not self glorification
When I rhyme girls clothes be taken -off
U suck at flowin thats why ur funds have been cuttin-off
never rhyme two of the same words togther^^^

u overall lacked punches and i hate that wackass sytructure ur new so i cut you some slack
overall *3*
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mike you had that wackass structure to work on dat
bestline:You could type with your brain, and still not “show intelligence”
Your rhymes have no-relevance, put a Caddy symbol on ‘em to flow-elegant
^^good
but you did this:
you went
2
2
3
2
2
your little "mini verses" had a diffrent amount of lines
if you gonna do that faggot ass structure do it right
overall *6*
my vote clearly goes to mike 12 for harder punches and better flow
v/mike

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okay weak battle

ACE'S VERSE

Ikeda sit down boi, Ace Diamond the new kid
Its gonna get messy, so baby lemme get u a new bib
^^^wtf is this shit....filler line

U choke and cough
When I rhyme girls clothes be taken -off
U suck at flowin thats why ur funds have been cuttin-off
^^^umm more fillers

If I flow nicely,u must be rather bumpy
Ur mom so fat I be callin her Humpty Dumpty
^^^first line filler second was a weak ass attempt at a punch.....played

But she didnt sit on the wall, she fell right thru
Then she had a screwed up baby, ahah and it was u
^^wtf where do you come up wit this shit....is it prewritten???

Ur the pussy that everyone talks about, cuz u still suckin on tits
No need to cry over this...
We know u cant make hits ....
^^umm not even a whole bar........you need to elevate

i dont even need to keep goping becuase it just gets worse


mike's verse

Your like awful skaters I’ll have you crashed-into-these-“boards”
I ain’t afraid to battle any emcee like I been-to-the-wars
^^bad opener needs work

You’re new to this game like the Charlotte Bobcats
Your wackness could have forced Run DMC to stop-rap
^^^weak

You getting a win is as rare as flipping an “ace diamond”
It’s time-then to see that you can’t rap even if you had rhyme-pen
Take it easy on weak emcees like I faced kind-men
^^this was hard to read and a weak punch....okay try at a personal punch on first line

You could type with your brain, and still not “show intelligence”
Your rhymes have no-relevance, put a Caddy symbol on ‘em to flow-elegant
^^^haha funny punch.....good job

You aren’t the number one diamond so please be-gone
Cause the real ace diamond’s found somewhere under the ground of Sierra Leone….
^^not a bad closing punch but you could still use some elevating

v/mike becuase his verse was just better anyone can see dat......punches metas everything

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hit this up with an honest vote please

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Ace Diamond:

Flow: 6/10
Metas: 2/10
Multis: None/10
Word Play: 4/10

Overall: 3/10


Mike12Ikeda:

Flow: 8/10
Metas: 6/10
Multis: 7/10
Wordplay 7/10

Overall: 7/10


Vote: Mike12Ikeda

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a yo good battle guys but ma vote goes to Mike12ikeda b/c he lead in punches, rhymes, structure, n flow (everything lolz)

a yo ace u did good but u need to elevate on everything n u'll b better good battle tho fellaz

vote-Mike12Ikeda