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02-17-04, 03:39 PM | #1 | |||||||
Sharp Perfection.
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humankind's home
IP: 4427 B15C
just something quick
Humankind’s home At last the drainy run down day finally reaches the night fall Where the sky darkens to a drifting blue with hints of red throu out & sailor’s delight leaves land lovers marveling at such a beautiful sight Such a peaceful time to one taking this in from the comfort of their porch But some can not see the sky God painted above in his lost heaven For they are to distracted by life’s evil stress that blinds them from all hope & love It is my blanket of love that the angels knit complete with the shiny stars It is my hope of a better place to explore when my adventures here are throu & it is a home discovered by so many lonely drifting souls before me A place where the angels dance upon the silky clouds fluttering with their golden wings To a melody so enhancing so alive & free that it is still unheard by living ears & with hearts so light & glad that it will forever pump their blessed heavenly blood Some day I will visit the great unknown & will die again at its very sight For it’s our calling to move on to this new world that’s hidden from our eyes Now you see it’s a gift built by God for us, it is humankind’s own home. ~Tera~ DONT HATE
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02-17-04, 03:51 PM | #2 | |||||||
emceeing is believing
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IP: 4577 CD9A
this is some prety deep stuff, I liked it alot....it may be a quick piece for you but still a very good one........I feel ya
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02-17-04, 05:07 PM | #3 | |||||||
..Soft Focus..
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IP: 1B3B C284
this was great filed.
a lot of good thoughts and metaphores, very well rounded emotional poem. liked the out line and base of this good concept. very well done...quick and dope as ferris stated keep up the good work
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