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02-08-04, 07:20 PM | #1 | |||||||
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check out my new song plz give feedback
IP: CE9A 06D5
OvDose ft NTense - "Jealousy" is the newest song
Check it out and tell me what u think / give suggestions http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/ovdosemusic.htm
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02-08-04, 09:22 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: EB79 B0E3
damn after the last track i heard..i didnt think it could get any wacker in the next 5 minutes..but i was wrong..the beat..your lyrics..this is complete trash..sorry dog..no offense..the only thing i can think is that this is some kinda joke..cuz its only worth a laugh..
pZ..
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02-08-04, 11:02 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
i'm definately gunna have to agree with dude on this one, what exactly was that??? there wasnt even much of a beat, did u make that yourself? i dont mean to be real critical or anything, but STOP! DO IT OVER!! lyrics could have been alot better too, but if u still wanna keep this theme, try a rewrite, get another beat...just, start from scratch man
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02-09-04, 04:25 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: C382 12E3
yea boy ima agree with the others, the beats wack, lyrics wack and u can sirtenly elevate everything, kept working though
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02-10-04, 11:50 AM | #5 | |||||
The Future of Music
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hmmmm
IP: AC97 A012
im peepin Jealousy right now......
the lyrics were OK in the begining, then it goes down hill, the beat aint 2much of a beat, the quality is kinda doo doo...this track could be alot better if took time (not sayn u dont, juss take more) dont take this as im hatin, im juss tryna give u feedback. It sounds like u aint takin rap 2 serious. CIN
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