This is unfinished, but I need feedback. I still have to do another verse. I wanted to see wut yall thought so far b4 i did another verse tho. I tried to flip this beat to a different topic. And no I'm not a wannabe thug. This is actually on some real anger shit that I needed to get off my chest.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/opeymusic.htm

Feedback?

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*listening*

hook is funny...nice...lyrics are nice nothing bad i can say about that...
start ad libing...some of the voice overs sound a little distorted but that
could be soundclick...maybe show a bit more emotion

nice shit man keep it up

nice drop

im loving this beat

wish tim would make a beat for me lol

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PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

the chorus is hot...Lyrics are nice....quality is good....adlibs would make it hotter but was never a fan of adlibs...nice work

Lol That Chorus Was Hot
The Lyrics Were Boring
But You Had A Nice Flow.
Decent Track.

This was semi hard to understand...lyrical content was really sub-par...I understand its a commercial track but ehhh...I don't like the beat...just isn't my style...delivery is kinda annoying...Flow is consistent...Not bad mun...Keep it up...Pz...

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when you said "turn that beat up" was someone actualy there to turn the beat up, or were you just sounding cool? j/w

hook - cool, i like
flow - wow, real simple
lyrics - below average
voice and quality were coo enough

hmm i dunno, i guess i just expected more

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just soundin cool lol. actually i just couldnt think of an intro for shit so i just went with it

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lol word

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listenin.. this was hot.. but my mixtape is cancelled opey.. thnx for the time..

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you fuckin hoe lol. o well i'll still finish it and just post the finished version on here then. no harm no foul

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This was nice, .. beat was catchy, like it suposed to be, .. lyrical content fitted the beat in my opinon , i enjoyed listenening to it, .. nice remixed, w/ the splivit shout out, nice-ness .. *Want to hear the song when its finished ..*

Nice one Opey Dokey o.O I want ur cd

Can I have your babies too?? please?

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send me $8 and i'll send u a cd. or u can try to dl it from kazaa but i'll tell the RIAA on u... BIATCH!

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where can i send it?? will u autograph it for me? youre my hero

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Fuck you

Strange everything is editted by Opey .. ~ I Wonder..o.O

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