10-14 lines
all rule applies

drop in 20 mins

fa sho....respecting people to vote on this one...i gotta feeling that no1 will (LOL) no crew/hate/d/r.......drop.

respect

You've all come to witness Renegades assassination/
With this battle in commence you see his health deterioration/
Have a celebration, at this fuckwits funeral/
while i spit in his coffin and use his grave like a public urinal/
Professional Dick Ryder, They call him the RB bicycle/
Coz hes ridden so many kidds hes turning into Micheal (Jackson)/
Blows for votes, but he'll always suck at battlin/
Think he'd been sat on by Biggie, coz his rhymes have all been flattened/
Like a parasite he hangs around and feeds off RB's finest/
Thats another plus for me, and for this Bastard..its a minus/
He's a bitch on Easy E's he thinks hes elevating/
This cunt just got burned worse than he will at his cremation/
Rene's a fuckin lead balloon, he never 'rises' to the challenge/
He may be the PRINCE of milkin hoes, but he's the PAUPER boy of rapping/
Like a parasite,

(that 'like a parasite' line is NOT supposed to be on the end, it just ended up that way when i posted it so ignore it!Its supposed to be in the middle in the line 'Like a parasite he hangs around...' but not at the end)

thank you

How can this bitch elevate when I clipped both her wings?|
This merkin gon make her "give a fuck" for votes to win|
>>>Check her profile
2-4 means you half ill........half wack|
But your verse is like 'school lunches', 99% CRAP|
You, MJ and Hazy? Does RB stands for RETARDED BITCHES?|
Trust me that I'll leave her like Chucky's face with a hunnit stitches|
I'm ruthless, punches all up in your grill like toothpicks|
Thought y'sold your 'soul' to 'Bloodz' when 'stains' recolored y' new 'kicks'|

OK HERE DIS IS HONEST LIBA GOT DIS SHE HAD ALOT MRE STRUCTURE PACKED IN HER RAP N ALOT BETA PUNCHES DO RENES VERSE WAS OK IT DIDNT RLY HIT HARD UNLIKE LIBAS DISSES. HIT DIS UP N B HONEST THX http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83858 ...........................PZ

uppin for votes



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yo i cant vote but for what it is worth, i think renegade got this...it was short and sweet and got to the point. liba's verse was hard to follow and i found her ryhmes corny. noth def need to elevate.

^^^ i agree Rene's verse was short and sweet it was all that was needed to sway my vote in his direction. Both need to elevate.

Best Line -

2-4 means you half ill........half wack|
But your verse is like 'school lunches', 99% CRAP|

VOTE- RENEGADE

Yo this is the layout and fuckin newbs stop voting if ya can't poll are ya idiots well
LD= her verse was better overall but the punchlines she has used were played out and kinda weak
Rene= his verse overall wasn't that tight but i liked the metas and punchlines he dropped they standing out more and shit
Vote=Rene

k, uppin for mo votes

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uppin...honest votes only.......

lol god, i dint think i was that bad.....................

come on vote on this for either of us, eh heh!

n e 1 care to cast a vote on this, wont take a minute, but you'll be doing both of us a favour, be fair, no crew/hate/ or dick ryding. You know the rules, i'm sure. Thank you for being honest.

RESPECT

opener:renegade
closer:tie
wordplay:liba dee
structure:tie
flow:renegade
punches:tie
personals:renegade
wordplay:liba dee
my vote:renegade


hit this up peeps
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84191

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