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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153077
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153075
G'luck.
pz.

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alright checkin in........ alright pc

i'll cut to the chase,how's this Tramp gonna match these wits..
...when his clothes are fit for a king ...to wipe his ass with..
Hottest Lead is when i spit 1st not when the FBI's on to them..
Hottest Lines on your paper are the ones that run Through them..
its like this kid ate my Heart.. the way he Took a Beating..
This battle's decieving, cause Arch's the only one here that's CompEating..
Smack this retard for talkin shit.. why take 6 days to get beat?..
yeah, im on Writers Block ..ILLegitimate on Wanksta's anonomus Street!..
Kid claims to be a "ladysmann1711" well its true they realy do notice you..
Arch's got a bye so sit back in the beef and watch as i chew on you..

Dont get the punches please dont vote but they are pretty simple.
Pz.

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mayn, this fucker set up his own battle wiht a newb//
thinkin, hed take me over, and slide into round two//
You knew you were gonna get merked, pray I posted late//
I think the fuckin dinosaur man jsut stumbled upon his fate//
the one time you get koed , goes down in history//
Hypnotist? forget to dickride? now thats a mystery//
Cause if you check his stats, its really quite outstanding//
That this kid is mod, and newbs he is still demanding//
Stop me, Please all your rhymes is borderline like Smart Convicts,//
This Mod could Body Slam me with Sars and still couldnt drop Sick//

dont vote if you dont get the punches.....

meh, this was an aiight battle. Neither came that hard.

Arch, your verse was decent. Had some good punches, but none really hit that hard. But they were aiight. Flow on this was nice though. Smoothly went through the shit. NBice. I liked yo opener though, that was nice. props, decent verse.

Ill, your was aiight. But I really don't think any of yo punches really hit that hard. It was kinda boring reading it. Try to make some funny punches and shit. But the flow was nice. But yea, improve the strength of yo punches.

no hate. v/ Arch. pc

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aight i vote for arch, the flow was better and had a nice decent structure to it,
his punches hit a lil harder but wit a record like that i thought they would be better
(being honest)
had a coupl multies, didnt seem to see them in ill;s though,
had a better opener only cuzed yours actaully rhymed,
and i say the closer was il;s cuz that was funny

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i'll cut to the chase,how's this Tramp gonna match these wits..
...when his clothes are fit for a king ...to wipe his ass with..
^^^lol, good punch
Hottest Lead is when i spit 1st not when the FBI's on to them..
Hottest Lines on your paper are the ones that run Through them..
.......blah!
its like this kid ate my Heart.. the way he Took a Beating..
This battle's decieving, cause Arch's the only one here that's CompEating..
^^^^^aight punch
Smack this retard for talkin shit.. why take 6 days to get beat?..
yeah, im on Writers Block ..ILLegitimate on Wanksta's anonomus Street!..
^^^^second line was dry, and stretched
Kid claims to be a "ladysmann1711" well its true they realy do notice you..
Arch's got a bye so sit back in the beef and watch as i chew on you..
aight closer...........

mayn, this fucker set up his own battle wiht a newb//
thinkin, hed take me over, and slide into round two//
^^^no punch in it.......
You knew you were gonna get merked, pray I posted late//
I think the fuckin dinosaur man jsut stumbled upon his fate//
^^^punch missed....
the one time you get koed , goes down in history//
Hypnotist? forget to dickride? now thats a mystery//
aight........
Cause if you check his stats, its really quite outstanding//
That this kid is mod, and newbs he is still demanding//
^^^aight personal
Stop me, Please all your rhymes is borderline like Smart Convicts,//
This Mod could Body Slam me with Sars and still couldnt drop Sick//
^^^nice closer

Ill's punches didn't hit as hard as Archs, they both had nice structure and flow
but i'm voting for Archeologist

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aight arch good verse i thought was feelin the opener an tha wanksta street funny ill you was blah i can see you still a rookie punches arch personal's neither structure eh same vocab arch but not that much so ima give this battle to......vote....Archeologist

arch took this, he just had beta punches....didnt think either of the two came hard here but arch had the harder hittin punches, flow went to ILL but that was about it, gud personals were limited too....vote to arch but didnt really need to come too hard to take this....

peace

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Arch took this easyly... he had goos structure and it was consistent nice flow and all flow well.. .the other opponent had iight flow too and he had ok strucutre but arch came this battle a win with his stronger punches that impacted more than Ill's.. ill punches were iight but not as good... also arch took it a lil bit with the personals in his verese...both were good but arches was more consistent and it was a lil more direct

Vote ARCH

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