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Archeologist has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 10:14 AM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 07:41 PM.

He cant 'measure' he under 'pressure' like a shook up can of soda
'Bastard' must have CHESS 'mastered' all them rooks in ya folder(1)
Fix ya 'words' aling ya 'verbs' and get all ya lame personals down(2)
Could'nt 'win' unless you use mod powers and 'spin' our verse around(3)
You 'played' getting 'a.i.ds' from ya homo lover only way youll ever be ill
You 'whacked' and battle 'stats' is 'facts' so what vets did you kill?(4)


1) he only beats 'rooks' rookies thats a little wordplay metaphore for rooks which are pieces on a chessboard
2)hes always talking about me being caliph who cares anymore
3)hes a mod only he can beat me with his whacked ass verse is if he switches it with mine
4)check his battle stats 23 wins all newbees the icepick he dqed icepick he sucks and only beats newbees

Archs one of the best to post around this place..
Empire was on his way up...
.....until i kicked my boot in the face..*
See its easy to diss with a link or a quote, dont like it do you?..
See you out of it before you got hear..
........Bcus you were already seeing two of you..**
Crack this Kid in the Jaw so your spittin threw the wire...
i just beat the winning streak...
............So call me the King of this Empire..

*im above him in skill.. even though he elevates i kick him back down.
**He made a thread saying that "Empire and Caliph was online..
Pz.

Voted For: Empire

He cant 'measure' he under 'pressure' like a shook up can of soda
'Bastard' must have CHESS 'mastered' all them rooks in ya folder(1)
Fix ya 'words' aling ya 'verbs' and get all ya lame personals down(2)
Could'nt 'win' unless you use mod powers and 'spin' our verse around(3)
You 'played' getting 'a.i.ds' from ya homo lover only way youll ever be ill
You 'whacked' and battle 'stats' is 'facts' so what vets did you kill?(4)

ive choose the winning verse....both were good but empires was more skilled.....''Bastard' must have CHESS 'mastered' all them rooks in ya folder......
sick line...very good word play.

my vote-empire

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archeologist...good verse,punches came strong,not many multies or much wordplay tho...best line..."See its easy to diss with a link or a quote, dont like it do you?..
See you out of it before you got hear..
........Bcus you were already seeing two of you.."

^^^good personal

empire...another good verse,had more personals and multies...some good wordplay aswell,puches hit hard..best line=Fix ya 'words' aling ya 'verbs' and get all ya lame personals down
Could'nt 'win' unless you use mod powers and 'spin' our verse around

^^^good personal.....the line had good word play too...

nice battle guys

my vote=empire

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^^^suppose to say the 1st line had good wordplay...pz

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Voted For: Empire

Empire wins this battle pretty easily bcuz his punches were on point if not a lil stretched but the structure was good
n wordplay was almost too much but it was ok
Arch. needs to dig for better wordplay n stronger punches
both need to work on makin ur flows easier to read
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Voted For: Empire

Empire
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay is dope.. some of ur punches connected.. decent personals..

Archeologist
structure is good.. flow falls off a little.. no multis.. wordplay is decent.. a few of ur punches connected.. as i used the concept u used as ur first punch a few months ago.. but anywho, good personal..

Overall
Archeologist had the better personal.. both had a good structure.. neither had multis.. Empire had the better flow.. better wordplay.. and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Empire gets my vote..

VOTE - EMPIRE

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Voted For: Empire

You lucky to have the luxury to break down your wordplay in this textceein empire, otherwise you'd have a lot of confused souls wondering what you were trying to say. You came solid but the punches were a lettle off today.

Archeologist

Closer sucked. you came hard still though. Decent punches. Once I got the "two of you" line it seemed to be a good punch. I don't like the flow though. It's like in 3/4 or something as I read it. Just don't sound right when I say it aloud.

But the winner...

Aggh this was hard .

Also Empire came a tad bit simple, but archeol came even simpler, another thing besides the flow that hurt him.

Voted For: Empire



Archs one of the best to post around this place..
Empire was on his way up...
.....until i kicked my boot in the face..*
3/10
See its easy to diss with a link or a quote, dont like it do you?..
See you out of it before you got hear..
........Bcus you were already seeing two of you..**
1/10
Crack this Kid in the Jaw so your spittin threw the wire...
i just beat the winning streak...
............So call me the King of this Empire..
2/10

Punches were weak and ya wordplay was simple basically it was a horrible drop u need 2 elevate before u even think about accepting another battle


He cant 'measure' he under 'pressure' like a shook up can of soda
'Bastard' must have CHESS 'mastered' all them rooks in ya folder(1)
3/10
Fix ya 'words' aling ya 'verbs' and get all ya lame personals down(2)
Could'nt 'win' unless you use mod powers and 'spin' our verse around(3)
2/10
You 'played' getting 'a.i.ds' from ya homo lover only way youll ever be ill
You 'whacked' and battle 'stats' is 'facts' so what vets did you kill?(4)
5/10

punches were played and simple and ya wordplay was ok and so was ya complexity overall it wasent a very good drop but u won cuz ya comp dropped even worse


overall both of u could use some elevation and some more clever ORIGINAL punches and that would help both of ya drops come off alot more better

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