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Old 02-28-06, 03:34 PM   #1
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Old 03-01-06, 12:20 PM   #2
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Old 03-05-06, 10:24 AM   #3
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iite iite, ill leave feed....

...ive nvr heard any of your stuff b4 honestly...damn thsi is gettin slept on?...kinda hard to ehar voice might wanna turn it up but the quality is reall good...goodvibe, delivery, ewmotion and flow....this has a hot vibe to it, got me bobbin the head...yea defnitly turn down the beat or up your vocals...lol, the ending caught me off guard...nice job tho

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Old 03-05-06, 05:55 PM   #4
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you def got a nice flow. except for sometimes where its not clear as to what ur saying but i do that too so i shouldnt even say that lol i agree with east coast u should turn the beat down and up your vocals a bit. didnt like the way u ended it. but its a pretty decent track.

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Old 03-06-06, 10:01 AM   #5
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Beat sounds annoying to me, throughout...intros ok...kicks in...flows nice, maybe turn vocals up a bit to shut the beat up lol...too much going on in the hook but the verses are on point, lyrics are ok. 2nd verse is best.

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Old 03-06-06, 05:01 PM   #6
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Old 03-07-06, 01:15 AM   #7
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Old 03-07-06, 12:05 PM   #8
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Old 03-08-06, 10:06 AM   #9
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beat: creative...I like it
flow: not bad dawg...just enunciate more
lyrics: tough to tell...sound coo...hook is mumbled
overall: I'd suggest redoin this...I couldn't understand your lyrics


Work on your articulation some...It'll make it easier to understand your lyrics...some of your words run together
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Old 03-08-06, 01:24 PM   #10
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beat:8.....yea..im feelin dis one....
flow:8....ya flow is on point
hook:8....its solid.......im feelin it
enjoyment:8...i liked dis one
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Old 03-09-06, 11:58 AM   #11
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Old 03-12-06, 01:38 PM   #12
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alritey.. umm. ur lyrics are alrite i guess.. its hard to understand it alittle..try not to mumble cuz I think thats the reason.. the beat is cool.. and your flow is right, but can elevate a little more on that than its perfect =P..
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Old 03-12-06, 04:36 PM   #13
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i like this piece the beat was ok got me kind of iritated
just keep elevating u doing good though
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