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10-15-05, 08:33 PM | #11 | |
20/20 VisioN
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not feeln beat, u need emotion, u just talkn no enegery
flow needs alot of work sounds robotic not natural lyrics seem lame chorus is a good idea, but doesnt sound right up the beat volume 2nd person sounds like a chick lol Quality is worse than 1st dude flow also bad, lyrics nothing worth remebering not a fun track to listen too Just practice more i guess 3/10
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