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08-04-05, 06:15 PM | #1 |
Poet's Daughter.
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Tweety vs @.
IP: 8845 5B74
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20-30 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Fully explain votes Vote on all Topical aspects Topic- God Has A Gun Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 08-04-05 at 06:45 PM Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in. |
08-04-05, 06:22 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 5285 DC82
@. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 06:22 PM.
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08-04-05, 06:25 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 8845 5B74
Tweety has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 06:25 PM.
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08-07-05, 06:07 PM | #4 |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 5285 DC82
As I sit infront of this tomb stone,reading your name
i try to imagine,why I sit here in vain your pain was running so deep like oceans were full its like intense radiation tryna remember you body still ................................ *Dose's off * As I take the short cut and reach the porch front I relise my doors shut And I want to pause but somthing telling me to quickly vanish out of sight I launch to a dark place like someone abolished light a quick fright reveals a crucial moment in any mans life laying next to me is my fathers eradiated body,no knife, I cant move my bodys still like a statue's movie -Pause- I gota think,find a reason for this guys leaving its right in front of my face but Im still not beleaving Such a strong man's existance been removed with ease the killer wants me,he just doing this to tease kneeling above him resting my confused forhead on his chest i wish i could of wrapped my body around him like a vest speradic climate changes bring my temprature down but Im still over heating when i hear a sound as I glance above lifes destiny a witness the killer this is the start of a lifes sequal like a new thriller cant let this maniac get the best of me,i will fight but how do i fight man whos kills as simple as turning off a light *dies* |
08-07-05, 06:55 PM | #5 |
Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 31CD 7659
Don't No show @.!........Cool.........................
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
08-07-05, 10:17 PM | #6 |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 5285 DC82
umm i allready poste my veres..lmao @ dont no show.
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08-08-05, 10:27 PM | #7 |
Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 31CD 7659
-GOD HAS A GUN-
by Lola Cruez sitting on top of the skies, where no-one can see me feeling so full with lust and devotion craving inside thee looked around the world for that pearl, that special someone someone who could fulfill and break this thy horny tension The fingers feeling numb.” I can't control this any-Longer" Fingers grabbing it quick as lightning. Moan loud as thunder Up and Down his hand goes like an crazy uncontrolled elevator Eyes Closed. He Pulled the Trigger and then all of them flaunter Quickly, Open Pores of Sweats started to emerge on his forehead He Felt so Worried that he aimed at the wrong place. ....................Them white droplets went down on the earth Instead . Happiness was all around. Everyone Smiling, enjoying there day Black Clouds Started forming and white rain started to make it's way Hitting on each persons head, light surrounding there mortal Bodies. Jaws Open, Vocals making this sweat sound in a passion able agony It was Like, Everyone was in a Choir singing Their Precious Voices All Human Bodies drop dead on the floor and made this Orgy Noises Fingers Touching Thier-Selfs,blood Rushing bezerk in their Vines Eye's Widen in Craze, as everyone grabbed each-other and inflict Pain When all finish, breathing like they had asthma. Each had red devil Eye's Black Clouds Moved away, sun started to shine but in surprise .................................................. .Everyone was pregnant, Even Guy's . Every Hospital in the whole country got an earful of screams Sweats pouring on every patient. In Agony wishing this was a dream Tears Stream on every Cheek. Heart Pumping so loud as Drum Babies Coming out Wailing , Like an rose that's being Blossom Women and Guy's feeling so relaxed, taking their babies to their home Hearts Warm, Looking at their creature that's been trapped in their womb Eye Lids finally shut on those toddlers face, Looking Like sleeping beauty. While the parents sleep Humbly, they awoke by an object sitting on their belly . . Hospital now facing an 2nd Attack of the "Pregnant" invasion. Screams every-where in doctor ears. They Suggest ........................................"Even baby's should wear protection"
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
08-09-05, 01:48 AM | #8 |
The Prophet Has Returned
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This was feedback posted for @.
IP: EEE6 2792
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Throwback Sigs. |
08-09-05, 05:51 AM | #9 |
Whys That?
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This was feedback posted for @.
IP: 5285 DC82
*relise's he should of tried/cared/gave a fuck about this battle*
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08-09-05, 03:47 PM | #10 |
Poet's Daughter.
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IP: E71D BCB5
Meh............Uppin.............................. ..
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
08-09-05, 07:16 PM | #11 |
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: D808 EF89
Voted For: Tweety
@.-Ok verse.Structure was good.But some lines didn't flow well.Basic rhyme scheme here and in the 2nd bar...full and still doesn't match.And what is the point of the "Pause" and "Doses off" in the middle?It was a little boring.Concept was bland.....Vocab. coulda been better too. Tweety-Better verse.I thought it described the topic better than the @ gay.Maybe it's the bigger verse or just better wording.Rhyme scheme was better...made shit flow better.But the concept made your verse stand out.God's gun=his dick.And he shoots it out the sky and it comes down as rain.Dope. Vote-Tweety http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203668 |
08-09-05, 07:59 PM | #12 |
Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 4B8C EBC7
Uppin............................................. ..
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
08-09-05, 08:11 PM | #13 |
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
sorry for wasting your time and not putting in effort tweety.. i just had other things to take care of.
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08-09-05, 08:13 PM | #14 |
Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 4B8C EBC7
It's all goodie goodie goodie goodie goodie goodie. Rematch soon. Cool?
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
08-09-05, 08:15 PM | #15 |
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
lol,yeh fa sho...once i get all my audio projects out the way.
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