You got 7 victory’s, but best believe you gon’ be stumblin’ now
Trynna be cool with ya sig, but really No-one Wants you Around!

^well..I get what you trying to do,with the NWA thingy,But the thing is..just having "NWA" bolded at the front of some words in the bar doesn't mean anything.It's not wordplay or anything.And if you spit it in real life,then nobody would see the relation.Cause you can't bold a letter in real life as a punch.
But..when you ignore that..you still saying No one want him around..which IS a punch.So..ok punch..
Nice rhyme too.

i dunno how u got yoself a win, cuz u neva came nice
if tha source rated hiz album, tha page would say hiz name twice

Well..creative and shit.But your wording was messed.I understand that they'd say his name once,to notify they reviewing his album..and they'd say one-mic again for the rating..But when writing a review..don't you think they'd say his name in between as well,at least once?Think about it..
If you worded it different..it would have been better.

Well..all in all...I'll give it to Kool-Col B for being more creative and shit..tho you both had problems..

vote-Kool-Col B

This is the longest explamation I've ever typed in a vote in PLL.