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05-20-06, 04:53 AM
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E=mc
IP: DEE5 0906
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FEED 2 {Verse} Ayo the graphical stats, of tactical math-matical rap Is actual fact, not your average practical tracks Gradually add and subtract, and guess the equation The lessons explainin the explanation for the question I'm raisin Nottin less than amazin that every breath that I'm taken Is like a weapon thats aimed to proclaim the death of our nation Smith & Wesson is blazin; step in the way and cetch a stray Spray the tek, I'll rain on any parade and festive occasion Lets face it I'm underrated and underestimated Set the record straight I aint afraid to set it fuck a reputation Aint no hesitation I'll leave you levitatin And elevated, like metaphysical meditation Vet stature, and I aint ever said a word Verse text master so I'm the best rapper you never heard So press reverse; like my lyrics were sped backwards Then return, cause if any word was said faster your whole head'll burst Pray to god for mercy, I'm the new king of controversy Diversity circles me, like a curse to adversity Serve an eternity, the inferno’s burning internally Burn to the third degree, man it's like a furnace enduring me Surely alerting me, handle this emergency urgently Verses is perfect, & every word I'm verbally murdering Leave the nurse inserting you surgically, it's a bad condition The last edition, I'm solving mass division like a mathmatician Smash the system, with lyrical activism Track precision's hittin harder than a head on crash collision Every rap you kickin is imaginary concepts My context has mean vocabulary content
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05-21-06, 03:46 AM
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IP: DEE5 0906
Uppin..........
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05-21-06, 05:48 PM
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IP: BA6E 13CC
This Was Nice Fam, Multies Like Crazy But It Actually Made Sence.. Nice Ish.. but IMO you over use Multies, this is good for text but your flow was off due to words that are mainly found in a thesaurus... like im into intellectual verses.. but just because you use a large vocab doesnt meen you know what your talkin about or that your smart... cuz its real easy to get these words and their meanings and front with em... anyways man
stay with it... `1 |
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05-21-06, 06:53 PM
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IP: DEE5 0906
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'PRECIATE THE FEED, BUT NAW OBVIOUSLY WHEN YOU READ IT YOU WON'T BE ABLE TO DETECT THE FLOW IF YOU PAUSE WERE YOUR NOT SUPPOST TO PAUSE OR IF YOU SAY IT TO FAST OR SLOW YOU KNOW WHAT IM SAYIN? IF YOU READIN SOME EM OR JAY LYRICS AND SOMETHIN DOESNT SEEM LIKE IT FLOWS RIGHT YOU KNOW YOU'D JUST HAVE TO HEAR IT TO GET IT, BECAUSE THEY PROFESSIONAL..SO AM I, I DONT LET NOTTIN SLIP OR MUMBLE ANYTHING TO SQUEEZE IT INTO A BAR, FEEL ME...& THE VOCAB WASNT THAT BIG TO ME, I AINT HAVE TO PULL OUT THE DICTIONARY OR ANYTHING, I KNEW WHAT I WAS TALKIN BOUT.
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05-21-06, 07:50 PM
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NO SURRENDER
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IP: 3A9D 1961
seeing your name i thought this would be wack.
suprised though, mad multis. decent.
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05-21-06, 08:00 PM
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-da prophit-
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IP: CF86 0039
yo man word up. seeing ur name i thought u was another wack ass noob who think they hot. but seeing this u went up in my black book. shit was tight. with all them multies u made this a pretty good piece... keep elevating kidd.
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05-21-06, 08:15 PM
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IP: DEE5 0906
CHEA DA NAME IS MAD CORNY AND UNORIGINAL, I'LL BE DA FIRST TO ADMIT THAT. haha I NEEDED SOMETHIN TO SIGN UP ON THE FORUM WITT THOUGH, I DON'T USE MY REAL RAP NAME ON THE NET. 'PRECIATE THE FEED THOUGH.
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05-21-06, 08:21 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: BA6E 13CC
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oh word man... thats so true i have that same flow... yea well good work haha `1
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05-22-06, 02:48 PM
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IP: F154 0779
the was a tight verse man
nice multis check out my verse somtime and leave ur feed: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228591 B eZ |
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05-23-06, 03:19 PM
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-da prophit-
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IP: CF86 0039
that is not proper feed The-king... that was tight is not proper feed...... u need to actual read the post if u wanna say something about it, and not just read of the others...
lol wut makes me laugh is that i act like a moniter.... lol
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05-24-06, 03:22 AM
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IP: 7984 B4A8
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YOU TRYIN TO GET PROMOTED TO ONE...lol UPPIN THIS FOR MORE FEED, DUDES IS ONLY REPLYIN NOW WHEN THEY NEED 2 LINKS TO POST THEY OWN JOINTZ..FAGITS NEED TO STOP BEIN SELFISH, IF YOU READ THE MOFUCKEN PIECE TAKE 1 MINUTE AND DROP SOME FEEDBACK ON IT. IT'S A LEVEL OF RESPECT, YOU DROP SOMETHIN ON MY SHIT THEN NEXT TIME I SEE YOU DROP SOMETHIN I'LL DO THE SAME.
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05-24-06, 06:32 AM
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IP: 9080 4ADA
this was dope, for real.
flow - perfect multis - dope - first i've seen that does them correctly vocab - dope metas - good concept - good Ayo the graphical stats, of tactical math-matical rap Is actual fact, not your average practical tracks ^^^^^these first lines created the want to read this entire piece. good shit fam.
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05-25-06, 03:36 PM
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The Topical Juggernaut
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IP: B7EA 3B3A
What's goin' on man. Firstly, nice flow and the multi's you had goin were top notch. I didnt care for the concept, just blah, plain. Though you do have some talent, you mentioned some where you didnt wana post under your real rap name, implying that wont get you any rep. here as most of the talented heads record aswell. I myself just recently started using my mc name (Pensive) from my privious name Mentalz that I had for 3 years here.
Anyways, about this drop. it was dope man, flow was damn near perfect vocab was used great and the way you used your multies is a rare thing, it all mixed up nicely. You have some talent. Keep droppin'. Peace.
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05-25-06, 06:30 PM
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IP: 7984 B4A8
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NO DOUBT, 'PRECIATE THE REAL FEED...I UNDERSTAND WHATCHU SAYIN ABOUT THE NAME, WHICH IS THE EXACT REASON I CHOSE NOT TO USE MY ACTUAL RAP NAME. I DON'T REALLY WANT A REP ONLINE, I HAVE ONE OF THOSE OFF OF THE KEYBOARD..ID RATHER STAY LOW KEY & SHOW SOME LOVE TO OTHER ARTISTS WHILE GETTIN FEED ON MY SHIT FROM CATS AROUND THE GLOBE RATHER THAN JUST LOCAL BUZZ YOU NAHMEAN, WHICH SOME MAY LOOK AT THAT AS EITHER BEIN SMART OR BEIN FAKE. BUT WHATEVA THE CASE IS THIS IS REALLY THE FIRST AND ONLY SITE I FUCK WITT, I DONT CONSIDER MYSELF A NET MC, NOR DO I WANT TO BE PORTRAYED AS ONE. IM ACTUALLY ON HOUSE ARREST RIGHT NOW(FOR SOME PETTY SHIT, I HATE WHEN MUHFUCKAS DROP SHIT TALKIN BOUT THEY GOT CASES OR THEY BEEN SHOT OR STABBED TRYIN TO GAIN CREDIBILITY OFF OF IT) SO IM MAINLY ONLY FUCKIN WITT THE NET SO I DONT GET RUSTY FEEL ME... NOT SAYIN I HAVE ANY LESS RESPECT FOR DUDES WHO TAKE DIS SHIT SERIOUS, IF ANYTHING I HAVE MORE RESPECT BECAUSE IM ON YALL TERRITORY RIGHT NOW, BUT ON THE OTHA HAND I DONT THINK ITS NECESSARILY SMART TO BE CREATIN A HUGE NET MC BUZZ IF YOU HAVE BIG PLANS TO MAKE IT IN THE GAME IN THE FUTURE.
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05-27-06, 05:25 PM
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IP: 7984 B4A8
Uppin...........
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