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.K.onfliktz 3 37.50%
Heroic 5 62.50%
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Old 03-20-05, 03:18 AM   #1
Jason
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.K.onfliktz vs Heroic

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Old 03-20-05, 03:24 AM   #2
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.K.onfliktz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-20-05 03:24 AM.
 
Old 03-20-05, 03:34 AM   #3
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Heroic has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-20-05 03:34 AM.
 
Old 03-20-05, 03:44 AM   #4
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Listen....

Heroic Spittin' Harder Then me? He "X"-Lacks the Skill..
U aint Hard..With Bill Gates' bank you couldn't pack a "mil"..
Hit Ya ches Leave ya wit Cancer N' i aint talkin bout Horoscopes..
Clean the lenses...strap up And leave this "whore-on-Scope",,
Fuck spittin fire..a spark will leave this fagget in Flames..
N' i'll leave ya Bottom Socked..like his Leg In The rain..
Kid aint heroic..cant save a cat..let alone save his rhymes..
Kon's doin math with paint cans..cuz im Sprayin nines..
You can't fuck-with-kon...Cuz the King will bust ya pawn..
Leave 'em runnin brain dead..Dawg..u remember wat bus you on?
Nigga i dump slubs This kids droppin trash..like dump trucks..
Mom had sex wit a retard n' have u...so consider yaself a "Dumb Fuck"..
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Old 03-20-05, 03:49 AM   #5
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Sorry To Break The New-To-You, But I Fucked Ya Bitch*
That Two Win Streak Of Yours,Must Of Bin Another Glitch
This Kid Knew I'd Win, So He Put KO Infrunt Of His Name*
50 Cent Aint The Only Mc,Who Aint Make It With "The Game"
Ya Never Be A Vet, Coz I Got More Referals Then You Got Wins
So Take Your Garbage Rhymes Back, And Put Em' In Recycle Bins
When I'm Done With You, You'll "Die Nasty" In An Ordaly Fashion*
Severly Damaged, This Kid Like A Cerial Killer With A Killin Passion
Ya Skill Is Compared To "Fat-Kids" In Gym Class Doing "Back-Flips"
A Magician Couldn't Help You If He Pulled Votes From "Hat-Tricks"
Listen, And Quit Your Bitchen I'm Diss Missing Your Ass Fast.......
This Kid Could Get A Four Vote Head Start And Still Wouldn't Pass*

*He Has A Thread In LL Saying He Thinks He's Going To Be A Father
*Dienasty, Look In His Sig My Nigka, It's Say's Die-Nasty
*Four Votes, All He Needs Is One More, But He'll Never Get It Coz He's Whacked
 
Old 03-20-05, 04:06 AM   #6
Adam
 
From: Canada
IP: 4A0A BEB6

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

Heroic
Sorry To Break The New-To-You, But I Fucked Ya Bitch*
That Two Win Streak Of Yours,Must Of Bin Another Glitch
Forced rhyme, but the personal was aight...6/10
This Kid Knew I'd Win, So He Put KO Infrunt Of His Name*
50 Cent Aint The Only Mc,Who Aint Make It With "The Game"
Good wordplay, and nice play on the name...8/10
Ya Never Be A Vet, Coz I Got More Referals Then You Got Wins
So Take Your Garbage Rhymes Back, And Put Em' In Recycle Bins
Eh...Not to bad...6/10
When I'm Done With You, You'll "Die Nasty" In An Ordaly Fashion*
Severly Damaged, This Kid Like A Cerial Killer With A Killin Passion
Shouldn't of used "Killin" Made the line streched...6/10
Ya Skill Is Compared To "Fat-Kids" In Gym Class Doing "Back-Flips"
A Magician Couldn't Help You If He Pulled Votes From "Hat-Tricks"
This was good...liked it...8/10
Listen, And Quit Your Bitchen I'm Diss Missing Your Ass Fast.......
This Kid Could Get A Four Vote Head Start And Still Wouldn't Pass*
Played...didn't flow all to well...6/10

Overall: 40/60


.K.onfliktz
Heroic Spittin' Harder Then me? He "X"-Lacks the Skill..
U aint Hard..With Bill Gates' bank you couldn't pack a "mil"..
Good wordplay...not to bad...7/10
Hit Ya ches Leave ya wit Cancer N' i aint talkin bout Horoscopes..
Clean the lenses...strap up And leave this "whore-on-Scope",,
Not to bad...wasn't to gread though...7/10
Fuck spittin fire..a spark will leave this fagget in Flames..
N' i'll leave ya Bottom Socked..like his Leg In The rain..
Hmmm...It was allright...nothing special...6/10
Kid aint heroic..cant save a cat..let alone save his rhymes..
Kon's doin math with paint cans..cuz im Sprayin nines..
Should be shootin for 10's...but good line...7/10
You can't fuck-with-kon...Cuz the King will bust ya pawn..
Leave 'em runnin brain dead..Dawg..u remember wat bus you on?
First line was good...second line seemed forced...6/10
Nigga i dump slubs This kids droppin trash..like dump trucks..
Mom had sex wit a retard n' have u...so consider yaself a "Dumb Fuck"..
Hahahaha, this was a dope closer...made me laugh...8/10

Overall: 41/60

No hate, good battle, and a close one...good job to both of you.

Vote: .K.onfliktz


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Old 03-20-05, 02:11 PM   #7
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That's A Shit Vote Son, And You Know It...........................
 
Old 03-20-05, 02:24 PM   #8
Adam
 
From: Canada
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No, It really isn't. If you think that I am dick riding .K.onfliktz then you're retarded because if you check Crews And Collaberations he has called out my whole crew, and shit between us isn't too hot right now.

Sorry To Break The New-To-You, But I Fucked Ya Bitch*
That Two Win Streak Of Yours,Must Of Bin Another Glitch
Ya Never Be A Vet, Coz I Got More Referals Then You Got Wins
So Take Your Garbage Rhymes Back, And Put Em' In Recycle Bins

^ That was all garbage.
 
Old 03-20-05, 02:25 PM   #9
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This was feedback posted for .K.onfliktz

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nice drop fam...
ya should have another win in the bag with this.
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Old 03-20-05, 02:27 PM   #10
Parallel
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From: West, Canada
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Voted For: Heroic

Kon
yo that was ILL your pretty dope wit them punchlines homie, your stucture was good, good vocabulary, nice creativty, i was feeling ya verse dog some nice shit in there, punches were an overal best for sure. just keep doin ya thang ight peace

Bishop
um never heard fo you before but shit thos personals were ILL some pretty nice punchlines in there some tight ass stucture some very good syllable counting in there, nice flow great vocabulary, but punches n perosnals combined and i was feeling that shit. peace

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Old 03-20-05, 02:29 PM   #11
Dirty Nigga
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Sorry but Parallel, we both know that was a bullshit vote....

how was heroicz verse better????
vocab?
LOL..
He had no vocab man.....

Kon killed it in the first bar alone..
much more consistant flow an personals from Kon...
we both know it fool, dont know why ya voted but your whole vote was basically BULLSHIT
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Old 03-20-05, 03:45 PM   #12
High-Dro
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From: Bridgewater, Nova Scotia, Canada
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Voted For: Heroic

haha...good battle

+Bishop+ - u had good flow throughout the entire verse...your punches hit hard and your personals just kept comin and comin....u packed a shitload of personals in there, good job...my favorite one was about him puttin KO in front of his name...personals, i feel, are the most important part of a battle...your vocab was pretty good too...keep spittin

.K.onfliktz - your verse flowed well and it was a good structure...u didnt really have personals...actuallly u reallly didnt have punches either...u gotta say sumthin other than ways you are gunna kill him...u gotta be more clever than thinkin of violent ways to kill....just get some wordplay goin and you should kill some muh fuckas...no hate...keep rhymin

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Old 03-20-05, 03:50 PM   #13
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From: B-H2O, NOVA SCOTIA
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Voted For: .K.onfliktz

im votin fo .K.onfliktz cuz i liked hiz punches better then +Bishop+'s.

+Bishop+,
Ya Never Be A Vet, Coz I Got More Referals Then You Got Wins
thats played.

and, i didnt like how +Bishop+ made hiz text smaller, cuz it made it harder fo me 2 read. u both had good structure, good flow, good punches, but i just liked .K.onfliktz verse betta. kontro had a betta opener and a betta endin. no hate +Bishop+ werd

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Old 03-20-05, 04:10 PM   #14
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Voted For: Heroic

Good Battle Pretty Ok Punches And Some Multies

Openor=Bishop,Good Punch
Punches=Tie,Both Punches Wass Decent
Personals=Bishop Had More Personals
Multies=Kon,His Multies Wass Decent
Wordplay=None
Creativity=Bishop His Creativness Wass Ok
Closer=Kon,His Closer Wass Fire

Overall Bishop Took This He Had Some Decent Punches And His Verse Had Some Good Personals

/V +Bishop+...............


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Old 03-20-05, 04:45 PM   #15
TeamOne
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Voted For: .K.onfliktz

Heroic Spittin' Harder Then me? He "X"-Lacks the Skill..
U aint Hard..With Bill Gates' bank you couldn't pack a "mil"..
this bar was ok... the first line wasnt that good of a setup and the punch didnt hit that hard
Hit Ya ches Leave ya wit Cancer N' i aint talkin bout Horoscopes..
Clean the lenses...strap up And leave this "whore-on-Scope"
ok end rhymes on this one, but ur losin this battle right now
Fuck spittin fire..a spark will leave this fagget in Flames..
N' i'll leave ya Bottom Socked..like his Leg In The rain..
haha, this line was pretty funny..... ur best bar so far
Kid aint heroic..cant save a cat..let alone save his rhymes..
Kon's doin math with paint cans..cuz im Sprayin nines..
This line won you the battle in my eyes.... pretty creative and the only line in this whole battle that really got a laugh from me
You can't fuck-with-kon...Cuz the King will bust ya pawn..
Leave 'em runnin brain dead..Dawg..u remember wat bus you on?
Didnt get this bar...... well its a kinda stupid line, unless im missin sumthin u were tryna say
Nigga i dump slubs This kids droppin trash..like dump trucks..
Mom had sex wit a retard n' have u...so consider yaself a "Dumb Fuck"..
LOL, another funny line..... better closer than his


Sorry To Break The New-To-You, But I Fucked Ya Bitch*
That Two Win Streak Of Yours,Must Of Bin Another Glitch
Blah bar.... ok structure on ur part, but neither of ur openers hit well at all
This Kid Knew I'd Win, So He Put KO Infrunt Of His Name*
50 Cent Aint The Only Mc,Who Aint Make It With "The Game"
ok line..... i think u shoulda flipped the lines so that the "KO" line was the punch/personal instead of the setup.... that woulda made it a real good bar
Ya Never Be A Vet, Coz I Got More Referals Then You Got Wins
So Take Your Garbage Rhymes Back, And Put Em' In Recycle Bins
Garbage rhymes = throw them in trash, thats been used plenty of times... this another bar that if u had flipped the lines it woulda been more effective
When I'm Done With You, You'll "Die Nasty" In An Ordaly Fashion*
Severly Damaged, This Kid Like A Cerial Killer With A Killin Passion
ahhh...... wtf????? i think this was a stupid bar and was totally filler except for the setp alil bit
Ya Skill Is Compared To "Fat-Kids" In Gym Class Doing "Back-Flips"
A Magician Couldn't Help You If He Pulled Votes From "Hat-Tricks"
Nice line right here.... but it wasnt enough to get u the battle...
Listen, And Quit Your Bitchen I'm Diss Missing Your Ass Fast.......
This Kid Could Get A Four Vote Head Start And Still Wouldn't Pass*
.......ok line....... prett bad closer in my eyes...... u started off really well and than slipped off in the last 2 or 3 bars......

gotta give this to kon for those 2 or 3 really good bars..... and because Bishop needs to organize his lines better to make them more effective

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