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Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-05 01:10 PM.

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-05 01:10 PM.

Ya punches so ugly, they miss but still manage to harm us
and dropping glass balls.......the only time he is marbelous
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Your land-scape'd, just disappeared and left you homless, dude
it dont matta if you got binoculalars, ya chick still wont have horizon you
Jewish you weren't so weak, half your verse will include cussin
And marv wont bite the bullet?.................only if we muslim (muzzle him)
Marvs the bomb? Then and im up and coming like the fuse is
cos beatin me's like turks, you mustaffa ghost writer to do it
He makes no cents..cause it comes to tramps, we point to this bredderan
But he would be rich in england the way im pounding his head in
So he got no dough,...Marv got less bread than redundant bakers
And he's just like the lazy cook...he never mashes t'aters
I could sell this bitch too a pimp...but still id fuckin own you
Id tell him to go hard or go home, but he'd have nowhere to even go too!!
I smoke jays...and even on RV, Marv is no exeption
cause im sufferin from illness, while he suffers from rejection
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Dont get the wordplay, dont vote... I will RTF on honest explained votes.

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I dropped.


Hurry up..........................

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im just keyin dis up,while u gota come out da book u queer.
daubs scared of pussy,he like osama..been runnin from bush 4 years.
why you took it here?.....they gassed u, u aint hot punk believe me.
and daubs honestly............i just see you ass a washed up E.C.
u like K.S.....u gon text 4 life neva flow 2 a beat, when im holdin da heat.
if u dont wanna hole in ya cheek,run 4 cover like in hurry goin da sleep.
u win battle only cuzz RV RaP aint about makin ya words ryhme.
its about who can cum up with a dumb punch datz y dis herb shyne's.
if daubs put out an album..i bet a million dollars dis queer would flop.
took em months 2 battle me he was like scared skydiver's scared 2 drop.

blah

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

lol at always texting and having an audio up.

Good luck anyway.

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Voted For: Daubs

Daubs:

Ya punches so ugly, they miss but still manage to harm us
and dropping glass balls.......the only time he is marbelous
^^ok meta ok opener 6/10
Your land-scape'd, just disappeared and left you homless, dude
it dont matta if you got binoculalars, ya chick still wont have horizon you
^^dope punch good meta 8/10
Jewish you weren't so weak, half your verse will include cussin
And marv wont bite the bullet?.................only if we muslim (muzzle him)
^^good bar 7/10
Marvs the bomb? Then and im up and coming like the fuse is
cos beatin me's like turks, you mustaffa ghost writer to do it
^^good meta 6/10
He makes no cents..cause it comes to tramps, we point to this bredderan
But he would be rich in england the way im pounding his head in
^^ok 5/10
So he got no dough,...Marv got less bread than redundant bakers
And he's just like the lazy cook...he never mashes t'aters
^^lol ok 6/10
I could sell this bitch too a pimp...but still id fuckin own you
Id tell him to go hard or go home, but he'd have nowhere to even go too!!
^^decent 6/10
I smoke jays...and even on RV, Marv is no exeption
cause im sufferin from illness, while he suffers from rejection
^^ok closer coulda been better 5/10

Overall: 49/80 (61%)


MaRVJay1009:

im just keyin dis up,while u gota come out da book u queer.
daubs scared of pussy,he like osama..been runnin from bush 4 years.
^^dope opener best bar in battle 9/10
why you took it here?.....they gassed u, u aint hot punk believe me.
and daubs honestly............i just see you ass a washed up E.C.
^^blah 3/10
u like K.S.....u gon text 4 life neva flow 2 a beat, when im holdin da heat.
if u dont wanna hole in ya cheek,run 4 cover like in hurry goin da sleep.
^^ok 6/10
u win battle only cuzz RV RaP aint about makin ya words ryhme.
its about who can cum up with a dumb punch datz y dis herb shyne's.
^^no 4/10
if daubs put out an album..i bet a million dollars dis queer would flop.
took em months 2 battle me he was like scared skydiver's scared 2 drop.
^^ok closer 5/10

Overall: 27/50 (54%)

Goota give this one to daubs for wittier punches. Marv wasnt as consistent as he usually is.

RTF with an honest vote on this battle..

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Voted For: Daubs

hmm to me this is an easy one for daubs.. MaRV's wordplay is just all similes wackly worded.. no offense marv.. u still are a good text head on RV.. but u wont do good anywhere else.. Daubs i felt u were running too match with the same style it was annoying Jewish Muslim Mustaffa.. but the Pound Line was dope.. same with the goin home line.. Marv your best line the way i saw it was you opener it was pretty cool.. but the rest of your verse seemed like you wasnt really trying much.. Both Your Flow was coo.. marv's structure gets annoying to read.. and Marv your closer wasnt very good.. whereas daubs had a cool closer.. personals probably go to Marv.. but overall heat punches go to Daubs.. and i found his verse more humerous.. and i like humor in a verse.. thats why im voting daubs..

Please RTF on Apostrophe Vs. Flow Intelligent

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rofl... at u droppin my name in there..

sorry but you got owned n shit...

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