clearly troop wins for putting atleast some sort of effort into it. both verses were entirely predictable and lacked creativity, but, ya ... it's pretty obvious that luc or whatever took this match.

vote - luc

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Yesh. vote troop.. definitely a more thought out story and better rhyme scheme.. not to mention daubs verse just seemse to much like a battle verse... i dont know, it just wont click with me... his rhyme scheme was probobly a bit better than lucs but luciano had some decent internals... anyway luciano wins this one... now vote on my battle.

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Daubs your ish wasnt put together well at all it seemed very rushed and not well thought out at all.. anyways your vocab was okay but thats about all i can say.

Troop your verse wasnt really that solid, your whole thing was predictable and lacked
emotion and imagery ... well not so much lacked but wasnt really strong or complex... your rhyme scheme was alright but still beter then daubs. so you took it slightly

Blah vote troop

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Luciano, That was one of the best drops ive seen in a while, vocabulary was perfect not even close to being over-done, i could actully visualize what you where saying and it all played off so perfect.... over the top 10/10, honestly


Daubs no doubt you came perpared as well, I will say i did enjoy your peice and i could actully relate it with pepole that i know in my own personal life, Your vocabulary wasent too bad i only got messed up once on the syllibals, very dope drop ......

Vote-~Luciano~

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