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08-12-04, 01:44 AM
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Proper Intro To $LXDiesel
IP: 6CF5 20BB
[Man who the fuck is this $lXdiesel man, what the fuck is his problem, fuck he aint gonna fuck wit me, i dotn even fuckin know who he is, NIGGA FUCK YOU]
Nigga fuck you too, whatcha gonna do about me I ma ran cirlces while you stand around me? I be that nigga to lova lova, and be loved by them But i aint in it for the love, but to be fucked by them Im filthy from the north, filthier then see your grandperents sex each other i be the one to fuck them bitches, and the one to always love another then the one you with man this is north's filth [Man fuck you $LX wut the fuck you here for, get the fuck out, man you garbage] Yeah boy run dat game and when ya ask me for a favor, ya can curse ma name cuz i aint givin shit to faggots who will never come out cause they afraid when they rap they will be victims of rout now that i finally got this fame niggas be steppin on me like i just woke and this bullshit just happened its like i didnt work out on the streets every day now its like i owe you for some shit, shit come on now [Man Diesel fuck you you aint sellin no keys nad even though ya got some money and some shyne on your ass, its STILL MA BLOCK GET OUT before...] before wut, im tyred of them niggas that say the would have get up if eh..umm...khkhmm...ah just shutthefu, shuthefu, shutthefuck up they think its them who've done work and we just got to snappin but it is like i said, this shit didnt just happen it took some work and some time and some pain on the top to see your close one and homeboys die on the block so i be that nigga named Diesel steepin it up SHUTHTEFU SHUTTHEFU SHUT THE FUCK UP
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08-12-04, 01:46 AM
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IP: 6CF5 20BB
aight uppin for feed back
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08-12-04, 02:10 AM
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IP: 6CF5 20BB
yo peep this
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IM BACK BITCHES |
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08-12-04, 02:35 AM
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$Thug Life$
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IP: DB8D 5EE9
nice shit man
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08-12-04, 06:33 PM
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IP: 6CF5 20BB
uppin for feed back ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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08-12-04, 07:38 PM
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IP: C2FE 1710
not bad...coulda had stronger vocab...but it was decent
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08-12-04, 10:40 PM
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IP: 6CF5 20BB
^^^^ uppin for feed back
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08-13-04, 05:30 AM
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IP: 6CF5 20BB
still uppin ^^^^^
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08-13-04, 05:54 AM
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
ya your shit was good 6/10 flow:4/10 punches 7/10 wordplay 5/10
you shuld work on vocab you didnt have to much rhymes in there but you had some good ones ight |
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08-13-04, 04:04 PM
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IP: 6CF5 20BB
aight thatks for feed back, ill work on ma vocab, its a work in progress. Uppin for more.
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08-13-04, 05:01 PM
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IP: 0CE7 719F
this was average.I didnt like some parts of it but it had ok vocab but sketchy flow.5/10
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