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08-26-04, 01:40 PM | #1 | ||||
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My Last Open Mic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IP: C1DA C961
im back for one more open mic, yes yes, its da original garanteed a.k.a. mjust23
"THE CLIP" Hook what keeps niggas in line The Clip What stays in posket The Clip And what owns da block The Clip verse 1 (spit it medium speed) If i reload and pump niggas in da chest, shels rite in da front clip clip on da tek ima connect on da neck u wanna bet pop off on the track,then pump off the back nine in pocket, infared for a rat, shoot up a dream,lay niggas flat dont trust ma shells, betta pray u get lucky brains on da ground, to me shit is funny gangsta for hire nigga i need some money spittin on ma sleeve, nose is runny menace to a health plan drown nioggas, he cant if i can u wanted warfare, nigga it come west coast heat, u no were im from inglewood warrior got straps how u gone test ma gangsta nigga, got gatts got niggas hogged tied to chairs u got pistols, nigga i got pairs this shit serious and i keep it real talkin shit bout me, u must want da pill electrical wires runnin through ya viens fuck around, i send five shells runnin through ya frame u wanna get gully, life ends today its real gangsta guns, put the knifes away hook(2x) THATS ALL FOLKS |
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08-26-04, 01:54 PM | #2 | |||||||
Dont Push Me Of Regret It
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IP: 6022 80DF
Serously its kinda good this is your last OM...to be honest witch is the best realy this was wack...not one line had the same Syllabus count...this throws the flow and structure....rhyme scheeme was also off....but i guess a good point of this om is that you stayed on topic for the most part..
5/10 ~HeX~
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08-26-04, 11:04 PM | #3 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
yo man you quitin lol you shouldent that was a oretty good song 6.5 outta 10 peace
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08-26-04, 11:58 PM | #4 | ||||
Banned!
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IP: 28AD 5545
thanx, uppin
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08-27-04, 12:05 AM | #5 | ||||||
Banned: Spamming
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IP: 72A2 5563
I say Dont Quit and Keep Elevatin ... Cuz LAST open Mics should be something That will Impact dudes ... Keep Droppen Fam
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08-27-04, 12:06 AM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
dat was koo had a good flow
nice vocab wasn't all dat dough coulda been better 6/10
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08-27-04, 02:58 AM | #7 | ||||
Banned!
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IP: 3240 794D
thanx uppin
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08-27-04, 08:25 PM | #8 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: 5043 32F4
yo that was pretty dope nigga you shoudl elavate tho man
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08-27-04, 08:26 PM | #9 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: 5043 32F4
just need some vocab an dto make yer lines longer 6/10
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08-27-04, 08:46 PM | #10 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
yo dope shit man but need to elavate
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08-27-04, 08:47 PM | #11 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
7/10 you kinda talk westside to much
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08-27-04, 09:02 PM | #12 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
seawriter man stop freepostin in peoples shit dawg...damn...anywayz...this seriously needs to be elevated dawg...structure and flow was fucked because of the syllubus count, like Hexen said, and it had very little wordplay...the hook was aight but too short...maybe if i hear an audio or sumthin by you my opinions would change...btw...why you quittin??
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08-27-04, 09:42 PM | #13 | ||||||
Umm...Yeah
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IP: 896E D654
uuummmm I say 6/10
it was okay but your vocabulary and rhymes were much too simple for my taste but the good part about your drop was that it flowed well enough to keep people reading....1
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08-28-04, 01:42 AM | #14 | ||||
Banned!
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IP: C1DA C961
thanx uppin
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08-28-04, 05:08 AM | #15 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: 81F1 E603
nice drop homie.....but like my nigga blackmajik said y u quittin?holla back if u still down 4 a remix of my drop peace nigga
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