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07-18-04, 03:54 AM
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tourn vs. play-toh
IP: 95FF 1D86
2 lines
spit in 30 minutes no hate no crew no dr no bull people reall votes anything against this is a dq... here it is people |
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07-18-04, 04:01 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 95FF 1D86
here's my punchline...
the kid morns the fact that he was ever born cause he always gets tourn... raps his favorite form, but face it losses come onto his wackness like raindrops in tropical storm |
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07-18-04, 04:06 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: CAAC F470
he's a soft kat..even his name forces worldplay and he knows...
that i dont even have to try..to get two lines easily through play-toh
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07-18-04, 06:42 AM
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IP: E265 E924
play-toh got nice word play and rhyming going on and tourn well its ok but could be better
vote: play-toh
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07-18-04, 06:59 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: E63C BFED
ok.. play-toh.. first line was ok, second line.. i dunno what u were gettin at by sayin raps his faverout form (doesent relly make sence) losses come into his wackness didnt really make sense either, but i got what you were trying to say and it wasnt bad.
tourn, playin on playdough, got that from the word go, sort of a weak first line though, second line didnt have enough syllables.. and toh and knows doesent rhyme.. i think you underestimated the other kid in this and didnt try hard enough.. it was pretty weak overall from both textees.. but to tell the truth.. play-toh worked it a little better, less filler, and the end of each line rhymed better. im gonna have to give this vote goin to play-toh..... |
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07-18-04, 07:21 AM
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[DeaTh-Is-NeaR!-]
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IP: 5043 32F4
play-toh: your punchline was good, i liked the rhymes u did and i likes the wordplay
tourn:yours was alright but it was jus plain and simple v/play-toh
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07-18-04, 07:22 AM
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[DeaTh-Is-NeaR!-]
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IP: 5043 32F4
do me a favour and return an honost vote on my battles that arein my sig
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07-18-04, 12:55 PM
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#8
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IP: 5D2A 3E3D
I think play-toh really needs to pay more attention to the words he uses. He rhymes, but doesn't make much sence. His "dissing" wasn't much.
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07-18-04, 01:00 PM
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#9
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Banned
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IP: A0F6 C493
vote: play-thou
he was more creative and tryed at a direct hit while the other guy aint come at as at him as he should plus play thou tryed to use multis which wasnt that bad point blank: i thought play thou 1 bar was better |
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07-18-04, 01:02 PM
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#10
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New to RB
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IP: 5D2A 3E3D
... and tourn needs some work too, but I feel he has the battle this time.
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07-18-04, 01:09 PM
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#11
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New to RB
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IP: C1DA C961
i vote play-toh for killer multiz
and jus an overall better punch vote-playtoh |
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