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11-26-04, 05:21 PM
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Sam Dope
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[rate]~Life's A Bitch~[rate]
IP: 4391 3AD8
This how I'm feeling right now...If you feel the same way, leave me some feed...thanx
..I'm tired-of-struggling, tired of always rhyming-and-hustling.. ..I'm sick-of-life, and I think-its-time, for my eyes-to-be-shutting.. ..I'm tired of caps-and-slugs, grab-and-runs, acting-tough.. ..And I'm sick of the world, that made me resort back-to-drugs.. ..I'm tired of slanging-bricks, chasing-kids, for their eighty-cents.. ..Tired of not-being-stable, and not-being-able, to pay-the-rent.. ..Sick-of-the-pain, tired of thunder, sick-of-the-rain.. ..Sick-of-cocaine, tired of thinking this-is-a-game.. ..Tired of slitting-my-veins, but the knife-isnt-help.. ..Sick of hiding-from-belts, why must I live my life-in-this-hell?.. ..Tired-of-family, tired of friends not being there-for-me.. ..Bouncing around like trampolines, and working at Dairy-Queen.. ..I'm sick-of-women, and sick of having to play tricks-to-get-em.. ..I'm sick of these trick-friendships, and girls who wont quit-bitchin.. ..I'm tired-of-stress, tried-my-best, but life-is-a-mess.. ..Too bad I can't start all over, and try-it-again... Lookin for maybe 2 cats to get on the remix to this...hit me up if u interested...SERIOUS RESPONSES ONLY!!! IF YOU'RE NOT GONNA DO IT, DONT WASTE MY TIME!!!! anywayz...leave me some feed on this...I will return the favor...Thanx...1 |
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11-26-04, 05:41 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 4391 3AD8
yo...someone gonna leave me some feed or what?? Jesus...come on yall...uppin this bitch
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11-26-04, 06:35 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 4391 3AD8
uppin this fucker!!
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11-26-04, 06:44 PM
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FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr
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IP: 8602 39CF
yo man...that is some dope shit...nice flow, word play, and structure was good...8/10...keep that shit comin
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11-26-04, 06:55 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 4391 3AD8
no doubt dawg...thanx for the feed...uppin for more...1
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11-26-04, 07:12 PM
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Black Poet
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
Yeah man nice verse a lot of emotion and some decent
wordplay could have uped the vocab... How can a 14 year old relate to all this ? Is this real or just a topical drop. |
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11-28-04, 11:11 AM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 4391 3AD8
alot of this is real man...I threw in a few lines for a topical...but alot of it is real
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11-28-04, 11:12 AM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 4391 3AD8
by the way, thanx for the feed...uppin this bitch!
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11-28-04, 11:30 AM
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New to RV
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IP: F7DF 18A7
ay Black~Magik that was hella tight 7/10 the word play was good and thats just tight cuz tha words are so true, really good word play
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11-28-04, 11:32 AM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 4391 3AD8
thanx man...glad u felt it...uppin for more feed...come on yall quit sleepin on this fuckin thing!! 1
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11-28-04, 11:48 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: 4B92 148A
thats some ill shyt man nice flows and topic 8/10 keep em comin bro im new to this shyt but hit me with some feed mang
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162583
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11-28-04, 11:56 AM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 4391 3AD8
aight I'll hit it up...thanx for the feed man...uppin this fucker!!!!!!!
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11-28-04, 12:40 PM
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Banned
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IP: B417 DEF0
yo this was fire mang...
multis was good, flow was good, all around shit was just TIGHT mang..... 9.0 outta 10..... fire... |
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11-28-04, 12:53 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 4391 3AD8
wow...thanx dawg...glad yall like it...uppin...1
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11-28-04, 12:55 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: C458 B454
Yea This Shit Was On Point.. On The Real.. Good Job ON This..
nothin you gotta work on either.. return the favor with a vote? hit my sig..
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