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Old 01-08-05, 10:19 PM   #1
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Kordozar vs Skriptz

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Old 01-08-05, 10:27 PM   #2
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Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-05 10:27 PM.
 
Old 01-08-05, 10:28 PM   #3
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Old 01-08-05, 10:50 PM   #4
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[Center]This Fello"Solja"Got Merked By A "Troop",But It Wasnt A Friendly Fire...
Usin A Pottasium And Drop Of Water Kid Still Wouldnt Catch Fire...
He Wass Fired 4rm "Subway"So His Chance Of W"rapping"Wass Ruined..
1 Of A Kind Kid,First Ever Ta Be Concealed 4rm 2 Men...
Be4 Legendary Mc's Made Cuts He Left Out Tha Group..
He Wants Ta Be A G So He Bit His Location Off Of Snoop..
Kids Not Made 4rm Rappin Like Poetry "Skriptz"....
His Bars Are Streched Than Tha Ladies Gap 4rm Floetry Iss..
Tried Ta Elivate,But Fell Down Like Pepl With Amputated Legs..
.........Why Should Skriptz Verse Even Go In This Battle?
Theas A Question You Post In Tha Thread......
Soulja42o? But Kids Softer Than Baked Bread......

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Troop Koed Him He 4rm 213 Like Snoop
Left Legendary Mc's B4 Cuts
And He Posts In Tha Why Thread Alot
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Old 01-08-05, 11:02 PM   #5
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Uppin Skriptz Verse.......................
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Old 01-08-05, 11:04 PM   #6
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No Punches, It’d Be A Miracle, Even If Kordozar’s Hans Were Connected
The Difference Is, I Rise To The Occasion, You Just Stand Corrected
The More I Read Your Lines, Seems The More They Got Worse
Looks Like You Got A Lot Of Bad Mistakes, Not Including Your Verse
Ya Battles Kid Are Wack, Not To Mention Your Flow, Its Terrible
This Kid Thinks He's Underground, Cause He's In A Toxic Waste Barrel
Said You Stopped Battling, Well You Should've Stayed On The Shelf
Those Versus You Made, Were Bad, You've Got Permission To Hate Yourself
You Think You Hard Kid? Ya Head Will Explode, You'll Be Retarded In Fact
I'm Enlarging The Wack, And Your The Biggesy Opponent To Harbor The Stat
Got A Repelant For Herbs, Good Thing This Is Internet, Kord Can't get Near
He Thinks His Future Is Bright, Cause He Got His Head In Tha Sphere


Dont Get Tha Punches Or Personals? Dont Vote Then
Hoes...
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Old 01-08-05, 11:05 PM   #7
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Good Luck Mayn....Just A Friendly Battle Though
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Old 01-14-05, 07:11 PM   #8
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Voted For: Skriptz

Kordozar:
This Fello"Solja"Got Merked By A "Troop",But It Wasnt A Friendly Fire...
Usin A Pottasium And Drop Of Water Kid Still Wouldnt Catch Fire...
Eh, decent opener
He Wass Fired 4rm "Subway"So His Chance Of W"rapping"Wass Ruined..
1 Of A Kind Kid,First Ever Ta Be Concealed 4rm 2 Men...
Opener was played, punch was weak
Be4 Legendary Mc's Made Cuts He Left Out Tha Group..
He Wants Ta Be A G So He Bit His Location Off Of Snoop..
Decent personal in 1st line, 2nd line was weak
Kids Not Made 4rm Rappin Like Poetry "Skriptz"....
His Bars Are Streched Than Tha Ladies Gap 4rm Floetry Iss..
Wack setup, punch was aight
Tried Ta Elivate,But Fell Down Like Pepl With Amputated Legs..
.........Why Should Skriptz Verse Even Go In This Battle?
Theas A Question You Post In Tha Thread......
Soulja42o? But Kids Softer Than Baked Bread...
Wtf? Is that 3 lines or 4?

Skriptz:
No Punches, It’d Be A Miracle, Even If Kordozar’s Hans Were Connected
The Difference Is, I Rise To The Occasion, You Just Stand Corrected
Setup was decent, but punch delivered. Good opener
The More I Read Your Lines, Seems The More They Got Worse
Looks Like You Got A Lot Of Bad Mistakes, Not Including Your Verse
Good punch, link made it harder because it proves he's wack
Ya Battles Kid Are Wack, Not To Mention Your Flow, Its Terrible
This Kid Thinks He's Underground, Cause He's In A Toxic Waste Barrel
Weak
Said You Stopped Battling, Well You Should've Stayed On The Shelf
Those Versus You Made, Were Bad, You've Got Permission To Hate Yourself
Decent
You Think You Hard Kid? Ya Head Will Explode, You'll Be Retarded In Fact
I'm Enlarging The Wack, And Your The Biggesy Opponent To Harbor The Stat
Decent bar overall, punch didn't hit that hard though
Got A Repelant For Herbs, Good Thing This Is Internet, Kord Can't get Near
He Thinks His Future Is Bright, Cause He Got His Head In Tha Sphere
Decent closer

Winner: Skriptz, with harder punches. Although you kinda over did it on the links. They were all there for one concept, and just one link would've sufficed. Kordozar, your personals fell short, and wouldn't made sense for shit unless you had the explanations.

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Old 01-15-05, 05:23 AM   #9
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ok..............

skriptz-i thought you had a good verse overall..........multeis were there and in good use didnt over do it.........good rhyme scheme structer...........punches were hard hittin........and consistant

kordozar- i thought your verse was all over the map with all puctuation...........................punches were ok not any killers........structer was iffy..........but ok verse overall.....

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Old 01-15-05, 10:31 AM   #10
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Thanks...

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Old 01-15-05, 05:01 PM   #11
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Uppin..............
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Old 01-15-05, 09:40 PM   #12
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he posts in tha why thread alot? whats wrong with that, i made that thread...lol...nah, but i wouldnt feel right votin on this battle, seeing how i made kordozar co-leader of NOK. this was a good battle. now i dont have second thoughts about him being co-leader. yall got skillz.
i was guna RTF for this battle skriptz, but u guna haf'to gime another battle. if u got any battles open right now, i'll get those, otha wise i'll wait til u do....but i was feelin ur punches, and personals in this..i think kordozar came harder with tha punches part, but u got tha personals category. some of ur lines were stretched too...i dunno who won this...good battle both yall...............1...............

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Old 01-15-05, 09:42 PM   #13
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oops...in tha back of my mind, i kept tellin myself to post feedback, but i accidently clicked tha wrong one. i meant to click feedbac. i'll get that vote removed for yall....sry bout tha mixup....no HATE, but i cant vote on this.....
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Old 01-15-05, 09:45 PM   #14
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Oops Meant Ta Press Feedback Plus He In Mih Crew!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
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Old 01-15-05, 10:04 PM   #15
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i PM'd strobe to have my vote taken off......111111111..................
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