aight this was a good competiotion
but destin2 is da winner here for these reasons:
more complex and interestin rhyme scheme, better vocab, and personals
my fav line:not speaking biological terms- but in rhymes , U~R~NOT~SIC//
More like simplistic homosexual , illiterately imatateing an emcee intellectual //
>>>my only critizm is the openin and closin were not great, and the punches could have been better

born2 u got some gud content, and punches
but the rest was dry and uncreative, u just kept sayin how wack he was but i did not quite see it you way, but descent effort overall > keep it up, and...
elevate

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