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09-01-05, 06:24 PM
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Middle Weight
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Jus Key-in It Up
IP: 8A05 210E
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204495
...jus give me my space..as i keep a steady flo & pace... ...don't get 2 close..like ya my notepad, i notice an error i'm quick 2 erase... ...diz rhyming thang comes naturally..jus like driving in my whip... ...i get all up in tha mix..like nachos, my flow gives u tha dip... ...speakin my mind..no matta wut situation it is i'm facing... ...cuz diz life of myne..i'm on a daily grind..keeps me steady pacing... ...eva line i spit is like i'm goin headhuntin'..lookin 4 my next vic... ...since evabody wanna act da same..it kinda makes it eazy pickings... ...tha world'z cursed..i'm caught up in it..so i live tha same way... ...it'z bout time we took a stand..& eliminate all fakes witout ne delay...
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09-01-05, 09:04 PM
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pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: 0F8C 09C6
didn't flow that well at first, but u got it back...... kool for a quick free. nice use of the synonyms and metas.....
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