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Old 08-15-05, 03:54 PM   #1
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Thumbs up Is He Real?

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Is he real?
the nigga say he sold coke,
sold crack sold smack welcome home black.....
Is he real?
nigga pushed a gold ac legend
but he rolled crap sevens now he owe cats....still...
Is he real?
see he ain't never say he shot niggas
but he say a real killa never tells....tell me....
Is he real?
and he say that snitches get snitches
and you young niggas betta never tell....
Is he real?

but this is where the shit gets crazy,
the nigga flipped gravy in early and mid 80's,
caught a gun charge no conviction or plea,
but be the first nigga sayin don't snitch on ya peeps,
now i might be wrong but i doubt that shit,
how many niggas do you know comin out that shit,
see the nigga baby mom got a sista name Navon,
Eddie Murphy style like to "party all the time,"
she said he got caught wit the gat in his breifs,
they started askin fa breifs and he rat to police,
he could of ate two to five but the fagit is sweet,
and he the reason half the block in the back of them jeeps,
now the nigga told me that the cops couldn't charge it,
cause when they pulled him over he wiped his finger prints off it,
but I ain't no got damn fool, i know the truth,
now so do you let me know ya point of view.

Is he real?
the nigga say he sold coke,
sold crack sold smack welcome home black.....
Is he real?
nigga pushed a gold ac legend
but he rolled crap sevens now he owe cats....still...
Is he real?
see he ain't never say he shot niggas
but he say a real killa never tells....tell me....
Is he real?
and he say that snitches get snitches
and you young niggas betta never tell....
Is he real?
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Old 08-30-05, 04:42 PM   #2
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Yo this shit is gettin slept on.

The flow was on a point and had a pretty good message.
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nigga pushed a gold ac legend
but he rolled crap sevens now he owe cats....still...

^ Good shit

Keep elevatin,u got some potential.
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Old 09-01-05, 06:06 PM   #3
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yea diz was a decent drop in a while vocab was nice, meta's were good, gotta say jus fix ya structure up & u'll b on ya way keep writing word up 8.5/10
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