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gesture. what son, gut one, next one,
who's he, where he from, what camp, best one?,
hell naw, he a noob, stress him, test him,
set it up, check him, battle cry beckons,
what's beef, what's real, someone, who steals,
robs, maybe kills, just for three square meals,
what's beef, real street, livin on them real streets,
spittin thru your real teeth, flowin to these real beats,
producer, hands to his mouth, a request, shout it out,
instruments for instrumentals, what the hell's that all about,
who iz this guy anyhow, ain't that one boy C's pal,
that kid who like to freestyle, this shit here's a keystyle?

^just a little somethin somethin to let u know i'm here...... typed this shit in all of 5 minutes........ holla at your boy.........

new to RV, please post feedback..........

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207882
^my link

my nigga......... not really your best shit, but knowin u this was a keystyle......... good lookin on the shout out..... lyricism get a 8/10 not really the best voc i've seen from u......... u iz a cocky mafucka tho..... overall 8.5/10 for the out your ass keystyle......... next time put it in the freestyle forum......

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