Hmm...how's 12 sound?

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^^^thats Good............check

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>>>>Lets Go.......Dont Sleep on the kid

Kids Like My Caddy Cuz He Holds My Stick AN Follows me Around U Agree
Plus He Could Be Caught In College Fires An Wouldn't Chatch Any Type Of Degree
Like Rhinos In Jungles Under Covers Ima Leave Ur Mandible Bites Ram Paged
....................Im Exposin This Crooked' Vet Like An Animal Rights Campaign
Wit the Blade I'm Quick WIt the Slice Then TAke Yah Body an Leave It Iced
An yea u ROck It Playin Guitar Watchin THe punishment Scene In Passion Of Christ
I Swing Deep Wit Them Hatchets, When Creepin On Ur patchs
I COuld Teach U My Tactics, AN Still u Couldn't "Fire Back" Sleepin On Matches
Have U Slammed In Tables Leave u wit more Holes Than a Pack Of Bagels
.....................preparin an envelope ONly time 9Th Landed A label
U Gettin Stepped on Like some Walkways...U COnfused R u in A Maze???
Cuz Y's Like The Twin Towers it Takes More than One Firetruck To Stop A blaze*

*mc fire Truck

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Yo

Says he's Rookie of the Year, but he stays on the shelf
He'll never get an award, so he had to make one himself


It's just the first quarter, already your MVP hunt stalls
But coach keeps you playing center 'cuz your main skill is to jump-balls
Fuck all, I'll get simple 'cuz your name suggests a young age
I'll stoop to your level and spit fire, baby, while you just Young Blaze
One page, of my writtens can top your whole catalogue
Get swamped with so many votes against you, you'll barely get past the fog
You're watered down, your ship wont set sail, dog, the mast is gone
Turn the tides and you'll get rocked, and not what the wave crashes on
The match is on, but your game's deceased, what do you think you're doin'?
You're so broke you couldn't auntie-up at a family reunion

Understand it or you automatically like boys.

G'luck Blaze.

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blah, I thought it was kinda crappy, but wt/v.

Nothing

vs.

It's just the first quarter, already your MVP hunt stalls
But coach keeps you playing center 'cuz your main skill is to jump-balls
You're watered down, your ship wont set sail, dog, the mast is gone
Turn the tides and you'll get rocked, and not what the wave crashes on
The match is on, but your game's deceased, what do you think you're doin'?
You're so broke you couldn't auntie-up at a family reunion

and those only barely past the boarder line. But..

V/ 9th Degree

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We got this done early for a reason. Vote, you homo thugs.

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lol @ me being only one to vote, cuz i'm cool.

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Young Blaze
Kids Like My Caddy Cuz He Holds My Stick AN Follows me Around U Agree
Plus He Could Be Caught In College Fires An Wouldn't Chatch Any Type Of Degree
^a lil too long...but punch was ite-6/10
Like Rhinos In Jungles Under Covers Ima Leave Ur Mandible Bites Ram Paged
....................Im Exposin This Crooked' Vet Like An Animal Rights Campaign
^^I think I heard a line a lil similar to this somewhere before-4/10
Wit the Blade I'm Quick WIt the Slice Then TAke Yah Body an Leave It Iced
An yea u ROck It Playin Guitar Watchin THe punishment Scene In Passion Of Christ
^^didn't like this so much-3/10
I Swing Deep Wit Them Hatchets, When Creepin On Ur patchs
I COuld Teach U My Tactics, AN Still u Couldn't "Fire Back" Sleepin On Matches
^^OK...-7/10
Have U Slammed In Tables Leave u wit more Holes Than a Pack Of Bagels
.....................preparin an envelope ONly time 9Th Landed A label
^^plaaaayed.-3/10
U Gettin Stepped on Like some Walkways...U COnfused R u in A Maze???
Cuz Y's Like The Twin Towers it Takes More than One Firetruck To Stop A blaze*
^^your best punchline..-9/10

OK..I think some lines..like the guitar on was weak.You had some played ones too..like the bagel/label one..n the vet one.Some of your set-ups was "blah".Keep it relevant to the punch.

9th Degree
It's just the first quarter, already your MVP hunt stalls
But coach keeps you playing center 'cuz your main skill is to jump-balls
^^good wordplay=7/10
Fuck all, I'll get simple 'cuz your name suggests a young age
I'll stoop to your level and spit fire, baby, while you just Young Blaze
^^2nd line was a lil too long to the first...wasn't feelin punch that much neither-5/10
One page, of my writtens can top your whole catalogue
Get swamped with so many votes against you, you'll barely get past the fog
^^OK....-6/10
You're watered down, your ship wont set sail, dog, the mast is gone
Turn the tides and you'll get rocked, and not what the wave crashes on
^^wasn't likin it much...but ite....5/10
The match is on, but your game's deceased, what do you think you're doin'?
You're so broke you couldn't auntie-up at a family reunion
^^Nice wordplay again-8/10

OK...I think you got this for being more consistant with your verse.Just more solid.Set-ups was relevant to punches as opposed to Young Blaze.I think the auntie-up n center wordplays got you this.

SO my votes goes to 9th for coming for consistant and creative.

Vote-9th Degree

young blaze vs 9th degree

nothing; last line was cool, but it was self-glore, ya hear

vs

It's just the first quarter, already your MVP hunt stalls
But coach keeps you playing center 'cuz your main skill is to jump-balls
You're watered down, your ship wont set sail, dog, the mast is gone
Turn the tides and you'll get rocked, and not what the wave crashes on
The match is on, but your game's deceased, what do you think you're doin'?
You're so broke you couldn't auntie-up at a family reunion

really liking the last line; i laughed,

v/9th for more creativity and consistency in the effeciency of his punches

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Like Rhinos In Jungles Under Covers Ima Leave Ur Mandible Bites Ram Paged
....................Im Exposin This Crooked' Vet Like An Animal Rights Campaign

VS.

You're watered down, your ship wont set sail, dog, the mast is gone
Turn the tides and you'll get rocked, and not what the wave crashes on
The match is on, but your game's deceased, what do you think you're doin'?
You're so broke you couldn't auntie-up at a family reunion


...not really the best from 9th but he took this battle for me, blaze just didn't come with anything remotely interesting apart from that one bar.

V/ - 9th Degree

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Have U Slammed In Tables Leave u wit more Holes Than a Pack Of Bagels
.....................preparin an envelope ONly time 9Th Landed A label

vs.

It's just the first quarter, already your MVP hunt stalls
But coach keeps you playing center 'cuz your main skill is to jump-balls
You're watered down, your ship wont set sail, dog, the mast is gone
Turn the tides and you'll get rocked, and not what the wave crashes on
The match is on, but your game's deceased, what do you think you're doin'?
You're so broke you couldn't auntie-up at a family reunion

v/ 9th...

not the best of battles... but still it was ite

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E.C- Untitled

Like Rhinos In Jungles Under Covers Ima Leave Ur Mandible Bites Ram Paged
....................Im Exposin This Crooked' Vet Like An Animal Rights Campaign
I Swing Deep Wit Them Hatchets, When Creepin On Ur patchs
I COuld Teach U My Tactics, AN Still u Couldn't "Fire Back" Sleepin On Matches
vs
It's just the first quarter, already your MVP hunt stalls
But coach keeps you playing center 'cuz your main skill is to jump-balls
One page, of my writtens can top your whole catalogue
Get swamped with so many votes against you, you'll barely get past the fog
You're watered down, your ship wont set sail, dog, the mast is gone
Turn the tides and you'll get rocked, and not what the wave crashes on

9th took this with some good wordplay and nice punches
blaze ya verse had potential, ya set ups and wording will make ya verses better
or worse

v/ 9th for the closer...