Rules....

5 Bars (10 Lines)
5 Votes = Win
3-0 = KO
No Dickriding / Crew / Hate / NewB Votes
Votes Must Be Explained...
Blind Post Verses Whenever
Deadline Tommorow Midnight (26/08/03 12am)

Good Luck...
Be e-Z

ROUX SPIT...

this filthy brat will end up flat on his back, this newbie is wack, frontin like a vet makes me laugh//
bitch i never grip a gat, but i stack verbs phat and squash herbs flat(splat)-1

oscillated my verse to ensure i cursed all of your words and burned out a third of your third world nerves//
flipin these hot words like birds i'm sure your bitch has curves like WHOA big like the curvature of the earth-2

Filthy is how you look when i leave you beat down in the gutter, soft beaten like butter, beat your ass with a putter//
and a nine iron till all you could do was just sputter, eyeballs all a flutter an you manage to stutter your wack verse with a mutter-3

The only throne you from is the shitter, just a third rate quitter i don't mean to sound bitter//
in prison you're known as a "tight pipe fitter" butt fucked like your sister popped your ass like a blister met your mom she's a "two fister"-4

mr. filthy it's your turn to spit, but you just aint shit, you useless like an old nun's tit//
throw a fit i bet your rhymes pre writ, your writs need to get slit , beat your ass so hard you got nowhere to sit-5

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FILTHY-MOUF SPIT...

This 'Fool-Is-A-Mess' So Im A "NewB"?... Nah This Kids Gettin Abused-By-A-Vet
Ya Crew-Is-Tha-Best??, That Cant Be "Correct" Coz Like A "Blunt ScrewDriver" Its Clear You Aint The Sharpest 'Tool-In-The-Chest'!!!!/...1
Impale Ya 'Chest-With-Knives!!' "Get Girls??"... Nah This Kid Preferrs To 'Mess-With-Guys!!'
Im 'Fresh-With-Vibes' Im Simalar To "Tite Specticals" The Way I 'Press-Your-Eyes'!!!!/ (Pessurise.)...2
Filthy Known To 'Despise-And-Beat-ya!'.. Its Like "Drawin With Poisonous Rulers" The Way My 'Lines-Deplete-ya!!'
I Make Ya 'Alliance-Weaker' You Should Call Me A "Deranged School Kid" For "Battlin" This 'Science-Teacher!!!'/...3
Ma Solid Punches Known To 'Smack-Ya-Face' Like "Fightin With Garbage" The Way I 'Attack-This-Waste!!',
This Kid Already "Knows Hes Lost"... He 'Lacks-The-Faith!!'... Audio's?? Nah, Your "Name Definition's" The Only Time Ya 'Phat-With-Base!!!'/...4
I 'Slit-Heads'... Filthy Known To 'Stick-Lead' In Ya 'Dick-Head!!'
'Rip-And-Shred' Vomiting On Cotton Reals The Only Time This Coward Has A Sick-Thread!!!'/...5


BLAH.....

Explinations
[1]... Self Explanitry
[2]... Tite Glasses Would Press Against Your Eyes ..LOL
[3]... Rulers Draw Lines, A poisonous One Would Deplete You ...LMAO.......His Whole Alias Revolves Arround Science....Hense Science Teacher.
[4]... Lacks faith--Check His Profile Under Intrests ......Phat With Base..- Roux Is A Mixture Including Fat For The Basis Of Sauce.
[5]... Self Explanitry

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Theres The Two Spits Just Drop An Explained Vote If Ya Can.....

PieceZ

Upping For Tha Votes....
......Make Sure You Drop An Explained Vote To Go With Your Poll Vote .....
No Freeposting.....

Be e-Z
Holla Bakk....-1

Ok Folks here's a breakdown

Roux
this filthy brat will end up flat on his back, this newbie is wack, frontin like a vet makes me laugh//
bitch i never grip a gat, but i stack verbs phat and squash herbs flat(splat)-

^^multi's seem real forced....no punch here really, not hard-hitting at least.

oscillated my verse to ensure i cursed all of your words and burned out a third of your third world nerves//
flipin these hot words like birds i'm sure your bitch has curves like WHOA big like the curvature of the earth-2

^^ok multis.....gotta combine them with punches though.

Filthy is how you look when i leave you beat down in the gutter, soft beaten like butter, beat your ass with a putter//
and a nine iron till all you could do was just sputter, eyeballs all a flutter an you manage to stutter your wack verse with a mutter-3

^^forced multis....

The only throne you from is the shitter, just a third rate quitter i don't mean to sound bitter//
in prison you're known as a "tight pipe fitter" butt fucked like your sister popped your ass like a blister met your mom she's a "two fister"-4

^^ok punch...ok multis


mr. filthy it's your turn to spit, but you just aint shit, you useless like an old nun's tit//
throw a fit i bet your rhymes pre writ, your writs need to get slit , beat your ass so hard you got nowhere to sit-5

^^ok....good flow...but bad punches

Overall-you had multis, actually your whole verse was based on multis, which dont mean shit if you cant sombine them with solid punches.3/10

Filthy
This 'Fool-Is-A-Mess' So Im A "NewB"?... Nah This Kids Gettin Abused-By-A-Vet
Ya Crew-Is-Tha-Best??, That Cant Be "Correct" Coz Like A "Blunt ScrewDriver" Its Clear You Aint The Sharpest 'Tool-In-The-Chest'!!!!/...1

^^oh shit....nice opener man...

Impale Ya 'Chest-With-Knives!!' "Get Girls??"... Nah This Kid Preferrs To 'Mess-With-Guys!!'
Im 'Fresh-With-Vibes' Im Simalar To "Tite Specticals" The Way I 'Press-Your-Eyes'!!!!/

^^nice punch...ok multis


Filthy Known To 'Despise-And-Beat-ya!'.. Its Like "Drawin With Poisonous Rulers" The Way My 'Lines-Deplete-ya!!'
I Make Ya 'Alliance-Weaker' You Should Call Me A "Deranged School Kid" For "Battlin" This 'Science-Teacher!!!'/...3

^^lol nice personal

Ma Solid Punches Known To 'Smack-Ya-Face' Like "Fightin With Garbage" The Way I 'Attack-This-Waste!!',
This Kid Already "Knows Hes Lost"... He 'Lacks-The-Faith!!'... Audio's?? Nah, Your "Name Definition's" The Only Time Ya 'Phat-With-Base!!!'/...4

^^DAMN!!!! nice fuckin line man tight personal

'Slit-Heads'... Filthy Known To 'Stick-Lead' In Ya 'Dick-Head!!'
'Rip-And-Shred' Vomiting On Cotton Reals The Only Time This Coward Has A Sick-Thread!!!

^^lmao nice finisher.

Overall-real nice verse......tight man nice shit......all i can say....9.5/10

Filth beat roux easily, this was one sided as hell...

Both of ya gotta work on your structure though, and numbering your bars is very herbish.

Vote=Filthy

Thanx Man...
I Apreiciate Tha Vote....
Thats 1 - 0 Filthy.....
Can We Get Some More Votes Please.......

Be E-z
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Def Givin This To Filthy Mouf... Dope Lines, Structure Isn't Very Good But Yopu Had Some Dope Wordplay In There...


Vote-Filthy Mouf...


Ayo Filthy... Come Join Up Wit DM, We Would Love To Have You, Drop A Tryout In Our Forum, I Think You're Good Enough, Just Gotta Get The Crew's Word.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...53&pagenumber=4

Tryout There!

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<center>Deja Vu

..Remember These Dope Kids?..

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Thats 2-0
Uppin For More Votes

2 CentZ......Whats That Crew In Ya Sig?
I Was Once In A Crew Called D.I And We Had That Exact Sig
Where Did u Get That From?

My Boi Finity AKA Metaphorz AKA PhrozenX Made Me That For The Crew On A Different Site, But The Sig Doesn't Look Like It's Reppin A Crew So I Put It In My Sig.

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<center>Deja Vu

..Remember These Dope Kids?..

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yo i'm in tucentz crew...
filthy go to tha diamond mindz forum, tucentz linked ya to..
ur ill..don't gotta tryout if u wanna be in..

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nice battle btw..

I Know Im Ill....
LOL
But Is Your Crew Tha Best?.....I Want To Be In Only A Sikk Crew.

PS...
Please Drop A Vote

Warlords nd Regime are tha best..but they're not acceptin members...
Diamond Mindz is not far behind...
I WILL DROP AN HONEST VOTE

Upping For Some More Explained Honest Votes..........
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Be E-z
Holla Bak '-1

Regime is the shit man the fuck you talking about?
Vote on battle mouthy boy...and i'll return the favor
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Don't feel liek writin a vote myself..
besides he sed it all..nuff sed

Thanx Yo
Thats 3-0 KO......
Can We Get This Battle Closed And Records Edited?
Thanx............

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