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11-29-03, 10:26 PM
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this is not finished yet . . but i still want feedback . . i want to know how i'm doing so far . . and it hasn't been titled yet so... . . if yall can . . try reading my piece and drop down ideas on what i should title it . . aright? it'll be appreciated . . get at me!
it seemed like we never saw through each other's eye/ the many lies i told you, still you never carried any dispise// the many times we argued about the stupidest littlest things/ behind your mood swings, were all of your deep teachings// just because i said i hate you at times, but it doesn't mean that i meant it/ committed to make me into somebody, but i never said i wanted to be the culprit// why don't you ever appreciate what i want to be? why can't you just let me be me? why do you see my future to be how you plan yours, sorry i can't agree// you're not trying to break my dreams, you're just trying to do what's best/ all for your suggestion and i understand, but i have to go with what my chest saids// Last edited by KLINIK : 12-07-03 at 05:09 PM. |
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