HAHA nice diss enjoyed Walters an Feeble's verse..........good shit.........dont know much about the beef but enjoyed the read!

Yea...Im Just That Damn Dope

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Nawfik's Out, Back To Chi...........

I Only Liked WW's Verse, The Rest
Was Pretty Bland.

nice no doubt. all verses had the elements of a battle script. nonetheless they
all make for a good open mic also. the punches and the keys were nice. the flow
was tight. the complexity was tight enuff. the aspects of a great diss all compiled
in one or another in each of the verses. nice job.

hit this up in return plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113109

pz

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nice drop guys..
i too liked walters verse the most...and then feeble
aisle and outwite came decent...not bad
overall it was a good read...i understoood most of the personals
which helps in reading a diss collab of course...

wondering how they will respond...interesting

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Eh...Not As Good As I Was Expecting

Pretty basic...but then again i dont really battle...

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I keyed my verse in a few minutes.....glad you all liked it

ehhh...

it was mediocre

it was aiiight...I don't really like versez without multiez too much...but the dissez were pretty good...Feebz was the only nigga with multiez though...but I liked Walter'z dissez...the rest was just ok...

Ok^

Nobody gets my personals.

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Upp!

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Aisle - first 2 bars didnt rhyme, dont care how u pronounce it it'd be a hell of a force.. bowling lane was really your only good line.. defenitely weak for a diss

Out - wack.. sorry kid, the rest even if they came wack have the foundation.. u got a simple rhyme scheme and horrible disses.. they shoulda left u out of this one, no offense

Feeble - a few decent multis, 2 good personals, rest seemed like filler with no good punches

Walter - had a different style from the rest, decent opener, and decent ending, but nothing in between seemed to hit.. need a more complex rhyme scheme

overall - not a bad diss, certainly not one that did damage, this is just an honest critque im not looking for beef, but from the name of cats considered "good" i was kinda disappointed in this, even i myself dont put much into open mics or disses i was still expecting more

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First of all, who the fuck is you?

Secondly, do you have some sort of speech impediment? pi - ty - yall, sick - uh - yall.

Moron, learn how to rhyme, and learn what a diss is. IT'S NOT A BATTLE VERSE, it's a diss with personals 99% of those that critiqued didn't understand, yourself included.

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