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Old 02-25-06, 04:10 PM   #16
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word...gotta chance to listen to this early...so u knew i liked it...

story is crazy....sample is nice in the beat....like how u came in on the 2nd verse...keeps your attention....verses seem like their short lol...doesnt seem like theyre 16 bars...

ending is nice......

dunno what to say about this...its just an all around good track man...keep it up

feed used 2/27 "Intermental Diss"

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Old 02-26-06, 05:19 PM   #17
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ah'ight Ike thats wassupp...keep the feed coming yall!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 02-26-06, 05:50 PM   #18
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dope beat, kinda tired of samples but its dope either way..

flow is on point

"Git In Bitch" lol

delivery is dope

emotion is tight

dope track overall man, keep doin ya thing
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Old 02-27-06, 09:50 PM   #19
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im listenin........

first verse....... how she became...... a hoe........ nice intro to the story....

second verse...... She wants out, but cant get out it, all the walls are fallin down around her, her mom gone...... damn

third verse.....now shes on the outs, no family...... no one to be there for her, besides the pimp....

im really feelin this shit

fourth verse.....only successful man is a pimp? .... wait......... does she shoot him (her pimp/father)?

i think ima listen to this agtain........ GREAT FUCKIN SAMPLE, TOO

Ohhh so shes lookin back on wen shit wasnt this bad in the beginnin.... and how her life went down this boulevard of broken dreams.... powerful fuckin track....... that mom part is crazy... takin over for her mom, damn.... man... i dont usually leave feed like this but i like the story, but im actually confused on WHO SHOT WHO.... AHH pm me or sumthin
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Old 02-28-06, 12:50 PM   #20
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beat ive heard it befor its ok fit the song well
flow was good like usual emotion was usual triple love it when u animate your voice to fit a role when talking flow is very good you switch it up wour the only person on rv who does that voice good lyrics were good you told a story was good
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Old 02-28-06, 03:59 PM   #21
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Usually I make a point of -not- hearing the "message" because I'm not really interested in what people have to say- just like to appreciate a good flow and overall sound... but this is powerful enough that it seeped in despite myself.

Love the beat, the background vocals, the delivery, all tight.

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Old 02-28-06, 05:06 PM   #22
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damn man i hate yoU! im jealous as hell ... lol seriously.. i can never drop hott music constantly.. but always do.. shit i guess i should start taking my team with my music.. well your verses were dope as hell n really layed back. flow is as fine as azn girls in bikini's =P and ur chorus is perfect with it.. iono how u can think of all these lyrics haha damn smart ppl these days *cough* haha jp =P
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