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Old 03-12-05, 11:08 AM   #1
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Finally A Song You'd Like.. It took me a while to change my song into mp3 and i asked everyone to do it..but then i finally went to my bro's house which is where im at now and changed the song to mp3.. and now you can hear it hope you like it..

The song basicly is an emotional song but over 90 percent of the people i've sent the song to liked it alot.. Architect still listens to it to this day.. Drama Queen got sad when she heard it, and Triple_N liked it alot...

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2018744
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Old 03-12-05, 12:22 PM   #2
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i really like it... your a good singer aswell lol... good song anywayz.. 9/10

your chorus is very melodic and yor effects where u got 2 voices was kwwl... lol best acoustic song i heard lately
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Old 03-12-05, 12:58 PM   #3
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aiight dope beat...nice mellow vibe to it..I can see this being a track for the females I can see them liking this style...great lyrics and voice lyrics seem to have alot of emotions and meaning to them production is good
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Old 03-12-05, 03:19 PM   #4
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181336 holla back at me

listening right now..........tupac nas beat, good beat, I always liked it.......................................your back ups are off on the hook, or when your singing, not a bad drop if you like that type of stuff, had some minor gliches like your back ups and riding the beat with your flow, cause your doing more of a singing then a rap type flow, not really feeling it cause it's not my type, so that doesnt make it bad, its not bad by any means, just not my type of shit, its kool though
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Old 03-13-05, 02:54 PM   #5
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hahaha im still listning to this song i love it lol...
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Old 03-13-05, 03:51 PM   #6
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Listening...likin' the guitars...whoa...very nice voice for singin'...you gotta do some hooks for me sometime...whoa very surprising...I liked this a lot...very emotional stuff, I wanna dedicate this to my girl haha...nice shit...you the Nate Dogg of RV. Nice stuff.
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Old 03-13-05, 04:35 PM   #7
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my frist time hearing you man
nice voice,nice flow,nice beat,nice chorus.nice drop man
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Old 03-13-05, 04:49 PM   #8
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yeh... i think its dope.. u want me 2 do tht mixtape cover still i got time to do it now...

haha yea sure man..thanx

and thanx speats.. appreciate it alot
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Old 03-13-05, 08:22 PM   #9
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yea the track was cool. didnt expect u to sound like this but it was cool. might be gettin at you bout singin on a hook. lol. nice drop man
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Old 03-13-05, 10:48 PM   #10
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Werd, singing on a hook would be a dope spot for you.

But anyway....This was a nice track with good emotion, nice beat. Got some errors onto it but still sound good.
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Ok Lots Of Bullshit In This Thread Ill Be Real Your Lyrics Are Weak On This Very Childish And You Need Much Better Vocab Here And Thats Real But Your A Good Singer For Real Dog You Have A Nice Voice Just Work Harder On Lyrically Content I Could Actually Use You To Sing A Hook For Me Holla At Me On Aim Therealcalishere
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Old 03-14-05, 07:17 AM   #12
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i like the fact you sing, yuor not that good but you try, good shit tho, im not gonna leave that much feedback becuasse Cali covdered it,

but more emotion and be a lil louder

and make a song with a chorus and i will spit on it for you, it will be a dope ass track, i promise
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Old 03-14-05, 10:57 PM   #13
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uppin for more feed....
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Old 03-15-05, 06:51 AM   #14
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Dont worry about CALI... Ive seen some of your good verses and this just wasnt a lyrical track.

This is the first ive heard from ya, but you sound how i expected...

Good singin n shit... peeps have already said everythin there is to say... but yeah some dubs were SLIGHTLY off but thats about it... and try be more open on the mic.. seems like you was holdin back..
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Old 03-16-05, 08:43 PM   #15
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