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Old 01-13-06, 05:45 PM   #1
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brought to you by Red Bull and Drakel....enjoy

Reflections


Impulsive scenes displayed with only truth to be told
Beholding images for solely human eyes to unfold
To discover the gold found hid within the Earth's den
Raised to decipher between all of the stones and the gems
To reveal what's pure and embrace the direction of verity
Reflections show how to endure life in total prosperity
But the clarity goes unnoticed, discarded to rarity
And it's barely seen, leaving us hidden from charity
Fuck, it's scary what you'll find beyond the fog and the smoke
Looking past and through all the wealthly lies, and the jokes
You'll notice different folk, the addicts, the broke
Mortals lost without hope, living life trying to cope
Lives full of hate, and truth, souls old and used
Once loved and cared for, once beat and bruised
Imagine life in their shoes, don't block it out of your mind
Keep your eyes peeled, it's terrifying what you'll find
You'll finally discover mankind is falling behind
We can't face it, so we just run off and hide
But the reflections don't lie, they carry the truth
So what will youth think when they see the reflection of you?


reflections are amazing, thoughts cross and convey expressions
of tension, mazes of questions, and plays for affection
bottled agression, corked with friendly trends and obsessions
neglected lessons of figures left guessing at direction
every oppression, grinds their own subjective impressions
rewind your life line just to see some collective progression
a hollow vessel, sailing depraved and solemn through seas of doubt
crusading for knowlegde, ailing for what lifes really about
clairvoyant voyages; torrent storms create vicious currents
distractions attract the eye easily as waves of pictures flourish
thats what the curse is; there's no compass writing through verses
but ignore the thunder and lighting, using the truth to nourish
worship who-ever for guidance, lost in uncharted surroundings
where darkness hides the only bridge to the boundary
beyond a horizon of pure composure; truth the only passage
roses have no thorns; imagine all entirety as placid
forever lasting, extracted through abstract ambitions
listen to that inner-voice; magic attatches fact and fiction
corrupted visions imprision free will, but see, hell can't keep it captured
a fission erupts a rapture; leaving all other reflections shattered
a tattered image stands, tranced, before the last of mirrors
behold the soul pure; time is short untill the glass obscures

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Old 01-13-06, 06:04 PM   #2
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Hope you enjoy it..
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Old 01-13-06, 07:10 PM   #3
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red i didnt read ur part im too lazy lol
drakel like the multis good flow id liek to see you and mentalz collab
vocab was good not overdone like alot of rv topical heads do so props
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Old 01-13-06, 07:18 PM   #4
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willa do you push the keys to type with the heel of your foot, your nose, nipple slap them? Because you're fucking typing pisses me off and makes me want to bash your face in.
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Old 01-13-06, 07:21 PM   #5
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To check the flow, I flowed those verses to a beat. 1st verse, flow is nice.. real consistent. Fell off once or twice. 2nd verse, started out dope with the flow.. then the change ups got kind of choppy in the middle. But yeah.. flow was pretty good for both.

The lyrics were nice I reckon. Shit got the message accross real well... nice vocab.. nothing seemed forced or anything. dope.

what else do i need to talk about?.... err.. fuck structure. I think thats about it.

but yo, good stuff.
id give it like.. 8 or 9 outta 10.
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Old 01-13-06, 08:19 PM   #6
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ok since ur all fam and shit now ill leave u feed too red bull
ok flow was god i actually flowed tat to a beat liked ur vocab u came perfect there
weerd dope piece cs owns
uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppp
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Old 01-14-06, 01:13 AM   #7
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Word.

We're fuckin' ill.
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Old 01-14-06, 04:13 AM   #8
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and mentalz ur a stupid fucking whore stfu but i still luv u
ohh uppppppppppppppppppppp
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Old 01-14-06, 01:49 PM   #9
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Nice drop fam dope shit.
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Old 01-14-06, 08:56 PM   #10
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Old 01-14-06, 09:07 PM   #11
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lol alright i liked both of ur verses and how it kep on track on topic and shit and meta's and everything nice work on it all I liked everything.
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Old 01-15-06, 06:32 PM   #12
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Appreciate some feed. I'll leave return the favour and leave feed on your pieces as well.
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Old 01-15-06, 06:40 PM   #13
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word this was a really good drop i was feeling it you both had nice emotions and good feeling...both had nice wordplay and vocab i felt both had very creative points of view..and i was really feeling how both verses flowed together..overall really good drop maybe this can be in the Hof of january.
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Old 01-15-06, 07:06 PM   #14
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Great piece man, your multies and vocab was real nice and complex. You were short and to the point, and the way you worded everything was original. You style i not much unique, but it tops a lot of other pieces i've read from other topical/poetry heads here. I enjoy reading your pieces a lot, PM me for a collab. Great read.
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Old 01-15-06, 07:43 PM   #15
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^ Word, Red Bull + Drakel = Dopeness yo..
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