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03-19-05, 10:00 PM
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Flyweight
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New track-I Wish
IP: 5988 85EF
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181447 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=182613 ---------------------------------------------------------------------- I havn't posted a song in a long time so i'll post one up http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/xx13ampxxmusic.htm "I Wish" This track is from Created's mixtape 'Audio Galaxy Vol. 1' Produced by Narcotic Order: First verse-Created Second verse-13 Amp Third verse-Created Hook-Created and samples Drop some feedback and i'll return the favor
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03-19-05, 11:40 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 3240 794D
The beat is cool sounding, 1st verse~ nice delivery, i like your voice, some minor production and mixing probs,but who doesnt have em..lol, 2nd verse~wow, nice voice and emotion, your delivery is dope on this track man, 3rd verse~same as before, but this time you have more emotion in your voice too, both had pretty solid lyrics....nice hook too, good overall track..1
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03-20-05, 12:57 AM
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Ms. Get Gully
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IP: 5F44 426C
nice little song u got here im feelin ya lyrics and ya flow is nice n smooth....unique delivery four clips nice anyways so i didnt expect anything less but nice....good job keep it up
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03-20-05, 07:20 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 1628 4BC6
yoo this shit coo as hell like some old summertime shit created off at some times but its still good and amp when I heard your verse first thing that came into my mind was amp should be on every verse lol but created third verse is a little better than his first verse
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03-20-05, 07:30 PM
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20/20 VisioN
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IP: A22A 9750
vocals should be a lil higher in begining, cant really hear him
1st dude flow, a lil off, ok voice, hard to understand a few words, lyrics seem straight 2nd dude betta flow, emotion str8, voice kinda.. ight lyrics a lil betta chorus vocals need a lil higher overall 8/10
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03-20-05, 10:51 PM
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I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
holy shit this song is fuckin SICK!!!....
hottest line 13 amp: i cant wish for light..when im blinded by the sun...
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03-21-05, 04:14 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 7758 810B
thanks for the feed yall, keep it comming
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03-22-05, 09:28 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
yea..peep ya shit days again amp....you still got the lyrics, along with the emotion and flow....both of yall had nice delivery....overall nice trackk....respect
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